There it is, there's the kickass Donna! Better chapter, nice job.

Um... I like the general theme of this chapter, but I think that was a bit Out of Character for Harvey and Donna. Maybe a bit too... cruel? Is the word. Anyways, looking forward to chapter two.

AWWWWW!

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! IS HE DREAMIING?! TELL ME HE'S DREAMING OR SOMETHING!

Noooooo! *crying*

Good story

This is a perfect story! Thank you for the time you took to dive into their minds and souls and bring out the pain and the love so detailed and vividly. I love the fact that you show the time and effort needed in order to build a lasting relationship and how their personal history was the greatest hurdle they had to overcome in order to find each other. Great job!

LOLOLOLOL - "Yeah, and the pope doesn't wear a silly hat."
That may be one of the funniest things I have ever read. What can I say - I'm a teenager with the mind-set of a child. Guilty as charged.
Love the story so far - I've honestly choked up a couple of times. Keep in mind, I'm not really the emotional type. But this is some pretty strong stuff (really good writing material)
Great writings, all in all!

That. Was BEAUTIFUL.

Harvey finally voicing that he has a heart. *sigh*

so that was good ;) I'm not normally a big fan if angst but I really liked that so you did good :)

Good, so heartbreakingly good. Its was so well written and really captured the emotions that i feel that those two would go through. Amazing job!

Awww, loved this story! :D It was too cute for words. :)

Peace, love, and all that shit...
Sasodeiizawesome

in love. LOVE IT SO MUCH!

The ending left me with the cutest mental image, ever. Loved it.