Ok what happened to chapter 5? According to the note at the bottom of the chapter it should have been out almost 6 months ago.

Will this story continue soon ?

Updating still?

Very good so far, looking forward to the rest!

Story canceled ?

Imho, your grammar is a bit spotty at times, but other than that, good work so far.

Great continuation to your story, and I feel really bad for Garrus, he's my bro. Hope Tali pulls through and Shep better apologize to Garrus, he didn't diserve that Shep, shame on you! (not you the author, shepard the character) The only thing that i can say is that there are a few spelling mistakes here and there, and Shepard doesn't recieve N7 status until after Elysium/Akuze/Torfan.

Nice story! Want More! And please, don't make us waiting for so long.

Update!

Interesting story here. Hope to see an update soon. I'm guessing that Sarah is either John's sister or fiance (or perhaps wife?). Looking forward to how things turn out.

Epic. :)

The waiting is killing me.

Just as the waiting for the shuttle is killing Shepard.

And Tali literally !

I hope it will not be to late...

After two months, I hope that the wait won't be much longer now.

i love this story i hope you are able to continue :P

can't wait for next one