Man, was this ever good! Neoshipping is the second-best Pokémon ship ever (first is Rocketshipping, duh), and I wish more people would appreciate the dynamic the two have. They are the mature, deeper shadows of Jessie and James, and not too many people have written fics that center around them. Like another reviewer said, typically Neoshipping fics encase a Rocketshipping plot with equal measure. I like how you edged more on Butch and Cassidy than Jessie and James here, going out of the typical fan fiction box.

You are an awesome writer! Everyone was in-character and the maturity of it just made it all the better! Well done!

-Passionworks

I LOVE THIS! I love the structure, and I love that Neoshipping is the main focus, with Rocketshipping speckled in. Usually when one reads Neo/Rocketshipping fics it's the other way around, and although I love Jessie and James more than anything in the world, it was great to see Biff and Cassidy to get the spotlight for once! 3

Hey, I read this awhile ago and even now, I still love rereading it. I love neoshipping just as much as rocketshipping. I love the dynamic between Cassidy and Butch in this fic. Him gruff and silent, her seductive and teasing. Great that way. I liked when she hit him. Seems very in-character and his response to it was great.

Also loved the rocketshipping at the end with Jessie and James. She definately would be the one going for a smoke and he would be the one wanting to cuddle. Great work!

Nice job! I love the cigarette scene; so passionate and hot! XD! My friends and I have a huge crush on Butch, too, so don't worry- you're not alone! Excellent writing and descriptiveness, too! _

Normally I don't read Neoshipping stuff even if I do love the pairing, but I knew I just had to when I received the e-mail alert telling me that you'd written something for the pairing.

And what a great story for my very first one. I LOVED the suggestion that Cassidy gets Butch's name wrong on purpose in order to maintain the upper hand in their relationship, and the fact that Butch is rather quiet due to being self-conscious about the way he sounds. I think that that's a very brilliant way of looking at things. :D

The way that you wrote about Cassidy first being disappointed at being paired with Butch (and again I love how you embrace his faults and keep him human) and then giving that awesomely hot description of the training session which changed her opinion of him - hell, /I/ was feeling a little flustered when imagining it - "His bulky body somehow made swift progress through the obstacles with small grunts that made the material rubbing her breasts cling just a little bit tighter to her body." was some really great phrasing. Cassidy, you lucky cow. xD

I also liked the inclusion of her trying to seduce James at one point, too (I've had a guilty love for James/Cassidy ever since "The Ole Berate and Switch." I know she was only being flirty and stuff to piss Jessie off, but still...xD), and her being horrified about it certainly fits her character. After all, he /is/ associated with Jessie...

Cassidy's sexual tension was written superbly. I particularly love this image: "Though she found it so cliché that Butch smoked, she couldn't help but feel a little turned on by it. More often than she would ever admit, she would find herself imagining them in various locations making love and his sweaty body reaching across hers to grab a cigarette to celebrate their respective climaxes."; it just feels strangely attractive even to me, and I'm someone who really doesn't like smoking. It's definitely something I could see Butch doing.

And I have no idea why you're complimenting me on "MtM" when you yourself can produce stuff like this! I like to think that I've read both the weird and the wonderful when it comes to sexual stories (and that includes 'real life' stuff as well as fanfiction), but I've never read something as wonderful as this. Combining Cassidy and the cigarettes was pure genius. I adored the way that you described the whole scene; it was definitely very hot without giving too much away. I could envisage the whole scene very vividly in my mind, and the whole wording of it was just perfect. I loved the word choices that you picked, particularly in this sentence: "Her free hand snaked down to part the skin and reveal her soaking, pulsing pink flesh to his view." Not gonna lie, that was my favourite piece of description in the whole thing because it's so to-the-point and the best way of describing it right now is "Oh God, I'm definitely in need of a cold shower." xP My brain really isn't functioning enough to give it the just praise that it deserves.

The Rocketshipper in me adored that little segment at the end. And I loved how James was on bottom. Unless Jessie wanted it any other way, that's how it would always be. It really made me smile when James said "'I thought you would like it if I were a little more forceful.'" Hehe, that's so typical of him; trying to be manly because he thinks that Jessie will like it. xD God, I love him. :3

On a random note, it's interesting to see Jessie smoking. I've never really seen her as a smoker before, but damn, she'd make it sexy. xD I've always been more inclined to write about Cassidy smoking.

Now that I've read this, I'm even more excited about the M-rated chapters of "Team Rocket goes Gaga". I've no doubt that I'll be a pile of melted mush somewhere by that time. I hope you can find the inspiration you need for the next chapter soon - it's a pain in the neck when that happens. :/

I'll just sit here at my computer religiously refreshing my e-mails until I get another alert saying that you've written something else. Amazing AMAZING stuff.