This was lovely. Thanks.

For Orihime, that must have been terrifying. And I love how Ichigo's protective instincts was screaming at him when Yuzu pointed out Orihime was running away from him. By the time he cornored her, I cried along with her.

Quite nice! Emotionally powerful.

This is amazing and sad and all too real.

awwwwwwwww I LOVED it! SO much

That was really cute!

Ichigo awkwardly trying his damnest to protect Orihime from everything. Even his instinct told him she's hurt. That's so like him.

Great one shot

Ok, I know this is an old story, but I just found it, but this can't be it! Omfg it was getting good!

Aww this is so cute! I love it! Please please please continue! This is a wonderful story!

I loved how Ichigo tried to reason in his mind what might be going on with Orihime. Him talking to himself was spot-on, as were his instincts kicking in at the right moment. That conversation with Karin and Yuzu was pretty realistic as well; it reminded me of some conversations I've tried to have with my older brother. (They had about the same results, too.)Enjoyable read, definitely. Thank you.

wow that was a good story! nice plot! - wt183

Wow. I totally loved it! It was sweet, and well-paced, and powerful in all the right places/ways, but still sort of not too heavy in all the other areas. Really, I only have one little suggestion, and I'm sure you've heard it before, but...it needs a chapter two. Or maybe a two and a three. LOL

On a serious note, it really was a great read! Thanks for sharing!

That was so good! Everyone was so in-character D It's so hard to find good IchiHime fics, I'm happy I decided to read this one! Thank you! Awesome job.

ahh~this story is sooooo awesome! Definitly favoriting,and alerting hehe.

I love how u keep everything in chracter,manage to add some fluff. Reading this fun was like the best part of me waking up early this morning hehe. Well I gotta go, but, keep up the good work )