"Ga is for the sound of someone choking"...is my favorite part of this whole story! I could not stop laughing as I read this. Oh, my heck! Thank you for such a great story.

TO funny.
I think Danny song about Steve was the best.

Love this! Danny sure uses his detective skills for his own amusement.

GLI (giggling like an idiot - yes, I'm trying to start an acronym).

Payback, McGarrett.

I'm glad you wrote this because I didn't think it was fair for Steve to make a public spectacle of Danny when Danny sang his M song only when Steve ordered him to and only in private.

Love when Chin ad Kono are giggling over the lyrics. And since my songs inspired this, I get my way.

You know, if you wanted to carry this on, I can see Kono pouting because she doesn't have a song.

(Chin on the other hand is dong the Jedi mind trick "This is not the character you're looking for." I don't think Badge would work in your story context, but Surfer Girl could.

(Gee, I'm so full of myself thinking you'll do more fics of my songs!)

Thanks for this. It's so flattering!

Ha ha ha! I love it! You make such beautiful use of Qweb's stuff. I wish you'd do a sequel using the Chin and Kono songs.

half expected that when Steve was on the phone with the governor that she'd get the email too.

that was so funny!

I loved the idea for the surveilance camera loop and sending it to Kono and Chin and winning that way. Poor Steve was so shocked..lol...I think you and Qweb make a good pair writing off of each other. Thanks for the smile and giggle. Sue

Oh those two just bounce off of each other so well. And now whenever I hear Danny Boy, all I'll be thinkin of is this. I'ts just so funny, Steve writing the poem on the back of the official incident report. Is there going to be payback?

I can seriously see more skirmishes in this 'war' between the guys happening in the future...

Love it!

So gorgeous. I was singing it to my empty living room!

OK, quick, change emasculate to immaculate. Right now.

Otherwise, love the story. But I think Steve is mean. Danny didn't sing his song in public. And he only sang it when Steve insisted.

Now Danny will have to share his song with Kono and Chin.

Fantastic!

Loved the singing telegram with the flowers and then Steve making Danny read the lyrics-priceless!

How utterly delicious! I love the story M is for... and I love your idea of how it came to pass. Now that there's a sequel will you write about that other song too?

Rach this was so funny. Steve couldn't let it go and then Danny singing it to him...too funny the words. Oh boy and I'm not a one shot person but this looks like a two shot with what Steve comes back with. Enjoyed this a lot. Sue