This is wonderful, however Snape would never be jealous of anyone's billowing cloak, simply because NOBODY'S is better than his, it's just fact.

Thanks for the fluff, very much needed :)

Hi. Not sure if you'll still get this review, but I just wanted to let you know that you write beautifully. I didn't read the original version, and I would've liked to read it, but I'm sure this version is just as good, if not better. You give yourself too little credit. Anyway, thank you for writing this!

This was really good, I loved their relationship and how Draco interacted with the other Gryffindors, it was just great :)

I really enjoyed this!

I read the end thing and saw "fondue" and I was like, "wtf is Steve doing writing Drarry fanfics?" BUT it was really good other than that. XD Very cute.

LOVE IT!

I don't believe in teenage marriages from anyone born in the last 40 years. Every single person I know that had one is divorced. I am happy you changed that. Your personality changes too much. I used to want to be the perfect stay at home wife and mother that was totally domestic and never have a pet. Not to mention I was extremely narrow-minded. Now that I'm older I like my freedom. I really don't want children. Maybe I will marry someone that already has grandchildren one day. That seems ideal, especially since I never could have any and that was a blow. I am extremely attached to my dog and I despised pets when I was younger. Even though I like being at home I enjoy traveling and being around other cultures.

I was expecting the sex scene to be truly terrible after what you said, but it wasn't. Have a little more confidence.

I'm not sure that's how I'd want to have my first kiss, but I don't think they can hide it from anyone anymore.

That was hilarious. I don't think I read the original version of this, but so far this one seems pretty good.

haven't read the original, but this was super cute with just the right amount of seriousness thrown in... What happened to Barney though?

I really like your story. I think it's very good and i can't believe it was written in 48 hours. And i love the cute draco ;). Thank you.

Ps : Sorry for my english, i'm french

This was very cute until it hit the horribly awful sex scene, and after that, while alright, it was still clearly rushed. If this story was written again, as a multi chapter fic, and every thing is slowed down and more in character, it would be a fantastic fic.

Still entertained me for half an hour though. :)

My ship has just sailed. I am happy