Did you take Perfectly Broken Down? I can't find it!

Wow! Just Wow! This is amazing! :O! I don't know how you can write so well! This is fantastic! Super! Brilliant! I don't know how else to discribe it! Absoulotely loves it! Thank you for writing this and I can't wait to read the sequel! (PS...I'm sorry for bad spelling :P!).xx

i can't find perfectly broken

with the egging finn says i don't want to be the person who eggs people or something like that and rachel says that was you

You write beautifully. Truly. You paint a picture inside the reader's head of what's going on, what it feels like. I have to say though, I really can't bear to even continue reading this, because I completely detest Rachel in this story. No one makes another person anorexic. Circumstances happen, yes. But a person's psyche dealing with it through an eating disorder is not anyone's fault- not the person who perpetrated whatever traumatic event, and certainly not the person struggling with what happened. So if she's recovering from an eating disorder by placing the blame for it on other people, then she isn't actually recovering at all. I say this as someone who spent years in therapy in order to recover from an eating disorder. It isn't the bad things that happened to her; its how she reacted to those things by destructive behavior that is the issue. And I feel like that isn't being addressed. I hope I'm not being offensive? I really am not trying to be. I can't wait to check out all your other stories. Just this one didn't sit right with me.

This was amazing - I loved the story before, and this. :)

I love how you write and word oyur story! It makes you feel her pain... Post the sequel soon please! :)))

Rachel's recovery. FINCHEL!

i love this last letter...it was a great story ...i really looking forward to the replies..im not looking for a faberry story but i think she should recieve a quinn letter with her response and eventually found out that she was the one to tell finn..cant wait for that...love it!

I like this letter a lot so good job! It's a big step in Rachel's road to recovery to recognize that she's ill and to admit the part she played in tearing herself down. It was sad to see what she did to herself and how she viewed herself with so much disgust but you wrote it very well.

I'm looking forward to seeing the reactions to the letters that Rachel wrote, especially to Shelby and the glee club. I'm fine with no Faberry in any form but I think that Quinn should at least apologize to Rachel even if she does nothingelse. Hope we'll get the next part soon!

Please let the next sequel have a lot of Shelby...her reaction to the letter, her visiting Rachel at the hospital, and maybe have her try to make it all up to Rachel (although, I don't know if that would even be possible). It sounds like Rachel has a lot of mommy issues! Maybe an appearance by Jesse? Also, glad there will be no Faberry! Quinn has done too much damage for so long that even the most forgiving person would be unable to forgive. Hopefully, Quinn will see the error of her ways and call off her personal vendetta against Rachel. Maybe even try to make up for her horrible behavior towards Rach, but Rachel just avoids and ignores her for the rest of high school.

I really want to see the reactions to the letters by the readers, especially Shelby's! I love that the last letter Rachel wrote was to herself, I think she needed to face her part in her disease.

Great Sequel, and can't wait for the next one! Yes, please do not make this a faberry story! I can never actually take those stories seriously... Besides, I like the Finchel scenes from your fade away. It was good! So... yeah.

I really liked the letter idea, it made sense and helped explain why she did what she did... So yep, I liked it!

eugh...reviewers beg for faberry? yuck, if quinn was a guy it'd be abusive and sexist but that thing is a girl so they're allowed to have sick sexual fantasies about it.

anyway, this letter was particularly touching as instead of feeling angry at who it was addressed to i just felt sad. my poor bb. update asap please!

Great chapter! Truth be told, I don't like Quinn much either, especially the one on the show. While I rather dislike Santana, it's true that she's horrible to everyone too but still, I thought she deserved a letter or maybe a special mention in the glee club one.

I know it's really random, but one thing that's bugged me is that when Mr Schue found out who put up the Glist, he was quick to defend Quinn because he sympathized with her but the moment Rachel does something, it's her fault and she has to claim responsibility for it. By the way, I love Unpretty and yes, it popped into my head, but anyway, good job. I think the egging came up in some dialogue and after seeing your reviews, I see that's true and perhaps people do tend to forget that Finn was a bully before.