This story is very interesting and amazing! I really hope you will finish making more chapters in the near future soon since this story is getting good! Keep up the good work man! Hope to see more chapters in the near future soon!

I love this story sooooo much! Is it discontinued? It hasn't been updated in a while and my phone says this is the last chapter. I'll be here to read the next chapter If you update it, and thanks for the awesome story!

Where is the last chapter?

Where is the rest of the story? I'm dying for the next chapter, the story is pretty good!

NARUTO IS NOT GAY

OH MY GOD

HE MARRIED A GIRL

STRAIGHT AS F**K

Holy shit i so hate you so much right now. How u could end it like that. Please find it ur heart to continue this story it beautiful and ur one of the few authors that deserve that title.

Jiraiya calling Naruto 'kiddo' is so much better when I know that according to Google Translate 'kid' in Japanese is literally 'kiddo'. Even if it's not true or whatever. Still.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH KAKASHI I DON'T HAVE WORDS JUST KAKASHI AHHHHH

yeah. next week. suuuuuure.

I really hope you updated this one day, I'd love to see how this all works out

its years past next week
please finish this story!

I love how Gaara saves Naruto

Your note at the bottom about Sakura, I completely agree
I thought she was becoming better, then she just had to say she loved him and poof, there goes my belief in her
By the way, I love your story
Critic- "You are placing comma's where they don't belong and they interrupt the flow of the sentence."
I REALLY ENJOY YOUR STORY SO FAR~
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I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks

OMG... OvO
This is really intense but I love it. I don't know if you are still continuing this story or not but I hope that you will eventually come back and finish it. The rawness and emotions that are comprised within the story are beautiful. Making you want to come back for more. I loved the slight diversions you made within the story. Some of the diversions you created were ones that could have occurred if Naruto had change in that perspective. Saskue and Sakura, are two people that care mostly about themselves than others and is what drives the wedge between their team. Even with all of the secrets, the ones they were keeping forced it. As Naruto never knew of the curse seal until it was to late.

The way you change Naruto and Saskue in subtle ways was a stroke of genius. It isn't enough for them to be to different but is shows the contrasting effects that they have on each other. Switching of preferred choices in foods is the most noticeable of changes. But, Naruto in my mind becomes the Saskue I think a lot people would have thought was going on with him. With and without the curse seal in place.

The friendship between the four boys is something that I agree upon. Shika is one of Naruto's most closest of friends, even though he puts troublesome of task on other people. Spoiler to the Last Naruto Movie - like what he did with Sakura. He got Naruto to confront her about his feelings for Hinata, where he would have been able to give the advice himself. Neji was a good choice as well. Considering Naruto had change him the way Naruto needed to be change back. While Kiba was the other version of Naruto that act like he used to in many ways but without the pressures that Naruto has over him. They compliment each other really well.

Them being ANBU is an added bonus. Yes! :)

Garra representing where Naruto used to be and helping him is really cool. I always thought if Naruto was in a situation like this Garra would be one of the only people that could really connect to him and make him see the truth. He is a defining role within the story and hopefully will show up soon.

I am suprised that it has taken so long for people to realise, even to some length, how badly Saskue hurt Naruto. It became evident after his verbal abuse from Sakura. The stupidness of the others around Naruto is crazy.

I think the only person apart from Saskue that I have always thoroughly disliked from Naruto was Sakura. It was easy to tell that Saskue was going to do something from the start. As his character was always shrouded in darkness. Also he was just a jealous a*****e. Sakura is just as bad if not worse because she never thought of the repercussions of her actions. Which we can tell through the discussion the girls had about Naruto. Of cause he was going to change (except in the real story line, much) if your friend/brother tried to kill you and out right stated it. Or the other person who though you were their friend never considered your feelings or emotion after nearly getting killed by their brother. Fully telling that you detest them for the rest of their lives. She is so ... Raw. Frustrating and unrealistic. She is meant to be the smartest but is the least smartest when it comes real life situations and other people.

She also got him doubting himself enough that he would have allowed the villages to kill him if it was not for Shika.

The elders have no idea what they are messing around with. Sooner or later they will realise that Naruto has so much dirt on them he could easily turn around and get them killed. They are playing close to the line where they could be considered for treason against the hokage and manipulating her own ANBU. I just hope people will realise in time.

They were also idiotic for not tell Naruto sooner about his parents. The likelyhood of the enemy telling Naruto was not something that they couldn't have done if they wanted to. Spilor - The main guy was the one in the end who set up everything. Using the Sharingan to take out the Kuuybi from his previous host and caused the destructions of the hidden leaf. If they were smart they should have killed the rest of the Uchias from the beginning. If Jirya had of told him early then the latest problems would not have occurred.

I hope you continue this story and finish it at some point as I want to know your end. I also want Naruto to be okay in the end as well. :)