Sweet. I can tell this is honna be interesting.

Holy SMOKES!
I should not have read this while I was eating.
Now my stomache hurts from all the Emotions!
Absolutely Horrible, Fantastic Story!
You Certainly know how to manipulate a reader's Emotions.

You just killed off (almost) all my favourite characters. Wow. Hope you're happy. Everyone seemed to be in character, except for the whole romance thing. I loved all the wizard of oz references but I am kind of surprised that no-one mentioned how there could be killers and corpses and voices, oh my, in the forest. Overall great story, except the ending. It was a little...morbid. I still can't believe you killed of Yakko

This was pretty good, even if you did kill off most my favorite characters.
Everyone for the most part was in character. For some reason I found myself really liking Val and Dickens. I loved the sense of mystery and suspense throughout the story. Even though there were some parts that I felt were rushed or could have been explained better near the end, I didn't mind those too much.
But overall, not bad. Not bad at all.

This is fucking sick. This fucking horrible fucking fuck ending is fucking the WORST thing I could have POSSIBLY thought of. Remember how I said that the only people I didnt wanna see die is Rita and Wakko? Well, include YAKKO to that list! THE ONLY reason I didn't include him, is because I thought you would NEVER in a MILLION years kill motherfucking YAKKO FUCKING WARNER! I am like crying so hard right now. I will never get over this. My life has just cunting ended.

YES! HOLY SHIT YEESS! You have made me a VERY happy person with this chapter. Please don't bring her back :)

YES! VAL MUST DIE! PLEASE TELL ME SHE DIES! Or maybe Dot, BUT WAKKO BETTER NOT DIE!

Why, the, FUCK! would you kill Rita?! She and Wakko are probably the ONLY people i DIDNT want to see die. Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck.

I think it would have been better if Val died instead of minerva, but otherwise, great GREAT CHAPTER!

WHAT?! I'm pretty dissapointed about this chapter. Call me sick all you want, but I REALLY wanted Val to die!

Amazing! I LOVE what you are doing with this story! I could go on about EVERYTHING that I like, but I fear that will take too much time, so imma just say the things I dont like (sorry).

Not a big fan of The Warners being in a relationship with an OC, or at all really. It just seems a little OOC for him to actually be wanting to start a SERIOUS relationship...

HOLY CRAP OMG OMG OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Honestly, so far its AMAZING! Alot of horror stories don't seem to work that well with A! but (so far) you have done it perfectly!

I'm also not a big fan of OC's, but it just seems to work with your OC's!

I do hate you because you killed off Yakko! EVIL!

AWESOME STORYYYY

Because you had to kill my favorite warner T.T but still very good story ;)