Oh no... This really freaking need to be continue!

Where's the next chap when we need it ?!

I Love serious fic like this with my OTP as the main!

Please continue...! TTATT

this is interesting please continue!

It's actually not that hard to get the fingerprints... 0.o forget you heard that. This is going really well so far! And Alfred's a good person, he would reather take it the rap then let someone else innocent go and do it. So Ben is the mastermind, It did seem way to suspicous for the guy to admit to the murder so soon, everyone knows deny deny deny And your Arthur POV wasn't bad and if you were strugguling I couldn't even tell! Well, long random reveiw will be long and random Bye

I love this story so far! Please please please continue

I LOVE this story! Please please please update!

Great chapter! I really enjoyed this and i can't wait to see what happens next!

yay more please.

Zexion

So Alfred can see the red string as well! Just a question though, would it be any use to them aside from knowing that the two of them are fated together?

I'm kind of sad that Arthur didn't answer Alfred's question for him. Does he see the red string or not? What will he do? Will he do everything in his power before he loses him behind bars?

Other than that, I'm just surprised that someone's confessed already. The investigation's too easy, lol. BUt I guess it's really hard to make a storyline like this. D: Although, it wouldn't be a good idea to let David get killed by Ben since he could make a good witness. A lawyer always needs to gather necessary evidence to prove his point.

Wow, fast update. When that kid confessed, I thought "Is that it?". I'm so glad that it wasn't. Arthur's pretty insensitive and I can see Alfred changing that. Setting up a youth club is such an Alfred thing to do. I'm looking forward to more of this. :)

Yes! I'm still absolutely positively loving this story! :D

~OMGitsgreen

You know this story kind of makes me think of the Phoenix Wright games. I know that is random, but it really does make me think of that. Also, on another note I thought it was kind of funny how Alfred has asked/yelled if Arthur had ever tried feeling for once considering that when Arthur did try that it ended up having him die of a broken heart. Anyway, I liked this chapter and I can't wait untill you update again.

Amazing update. I was guessing the entire way through, and the last bit sent chills. I'm exited to know how Al died! Though I want to know if this will be a long story or just around 10 chapters?

Please update soon!

I love this. I really do. I was hooked on the first chapter and uber excited that you updated. You have a few unfinished sentences, but I love where the plot is going. I hope you update soon! .

I am hooked already. Arthur is so bitter and lonely. Alfred seems to be lonely too; after all, nobody believes a murderer. I really like it in fics when Gilbert and Arthur are bros and I hope they will be in this one. Also, can Alfred see the red string? And your writing is delightful, but there are a few grammatical errors you need watch out for. I'd love to see more of this wonderful fic.

I like! Hope you continue!