Oh my, this is such a gorgeous story. I love the way you capture the awkwardness on Felicity's side in the beginning, when she sees how much Ben has changed but feels like she hasn't, and how her new feelings around him confuse her - such a perfect depiction of the strangeness young love. I love how the suspense builds as she approaches him by the paddock, and I could hear each of their voices perfectly in their conversation, which was so tender and sweet. I lol'ed at the flasback to Annabelle's crush on him in the series. Really wonderful work.

P.S. Congrats! You have one of the most reviewed fics in this fandom, and I'll be sharing it at my forum. :)

This was ethereal. Perfect. Awesome. Stunning. Breathtaking.

Awww, this is perfect! I'm pretty sure Ben/Felicity was my very first OTP, long before OTP and shipping were actual things. I always imagined they would end up together. Love the story!

You ever read Dawn's Early Light? This is making me think of that book right now.

That's a good thing. Thank you for all the happy feels!

Aww... (sniff) so sweet!

Alough it's hard to take, my love life in a wreck like it is...

I LOVE YOU MATTHEW FRITZINGER!

Wow I wish you could actually write a whole sequel series of Felicity when she's grownup. It would be so cool to see her courtship to Ben written this way...

Yes , Felicity/Ben for the way! This was very beautifully written, you captured thier emotions so well!

This was absolutely beautiful. You captured the tentative awkwardness of coming together again after so much time apart and facing the changes they have found in each other, especially after going through the war. This was pure perfection, Ben and Felicity solidly based in reality. Well done!

This is awesome!

wow i love it tis like i say in german ich lieb felicity

This is the cutest ben/lissie fic I have read!

Been thinking about american girl being that independence day is right around the corner and i happened to find this fic. in short, it's amazing. makes me want to go back and find my old felicity books and read them all again!

That was a sweet story.

That was amazing, the way you depicted Felicity was PERFECT she is not a little girl anymore but she still maintains those quirky characteristics that make us all relate to her! oh and Ben is dreamy- (:

Oh, that was lovely. Simply lovely! So intense and beautiful. I loved your depictions of Felicity and Ben. I don't think I've seen someone make Ben come so alive as you have. Loved the deepness of their affection for each other. Loved, loved their discussion. I could just see them, leaning against the fence, talking in hushed, earnest tones, their eyes shining. Magical.

And I loved that bit about Ben blushing like the first blush on an apricot. Fitting, but I would never have thought of that.

I do hope you'll write more Ben/Felicity. I would love to see more exquisiteness from you.