Such talent! It is so refreshing reading this. It doesn’t follow the usual stuck in the gz story. A lot of stuff are happening but it’s not making me confused at all. Also a win for every character. They are all in character! Such an amazing fic. So sad that it’s been 9 years since the last update. For sure you already improved so much.

I'm completely captivated by the story.
One thing though, have you thought of Wulf being a possible way out of the GZ?

That first part at the beginning was horrible she can't be Alive with a pole to the head

spectacular!~~~

What languge is Sam's chant?

Man, I'm reading this for the first time and you made me cry at work as can't what to see what happens.

I just gotta say, this story is so interesting no matter how many times i read it (which is my 5th time!)

Okay, since this hasn't been updated since 2011 i can understand that you probably aren't going to finish this (whoch sucks because this is amazing but i get it life happens ) so is there any chance that you would post a "chapter" thats just a couple paragraphs on what you intended to do? (I would really like to see what would've happened and i bet so would a lot of other people)

Anyway I hope that even if you aren't writing this that you're still writing something somewhere cuz you're awesome.

awesome!

Even though it's abandoned, it's still worth the read

okay I'm going to give a little critic if you don't want it please disregard this: You explain too much without anything really going on. You could explain what they are wearing, like one or two items, but going down to the color of their shoes is just tedious. It's like you're trying to cram all the info in before you get to anything.

On a lighter note your writing structure is pretty flawless

Please update! You can't abandon this! It's a great story!

Where is the rest? I need this it's amazing!

since this story wont be updated can you at least tell us the power?

Please update soon!