Hmmm quite twisty and plotty... well done!

First things fírst: I really like your fic, and have read it several times already, but I always get a bad taste in my mouth when I read about the parenting decisions you have Sirius make.

I think it is a very bad idea to give a seriously abused child to a seriously damaged character to raise and then make him threaten said child with corporeal punishment if he shouted out against more abuse (and yes, just pulling Harry out of Hogwarts, away from the only place he ever considered home, would be a form of abuse). Anyway, Sirius should have started that conversation totally differently. Still, I do not really think Harry would have behaved like he did in your fic. He would not have blustered, he would have shrunk into himself, lost whatever respect for and trust in his godfather he ever had and - I'm guessing - either completely lost hope or tried to run away, because yet another grown-up had shown that Harry's feelings are completely and utterly irrelevant.

Also: ABUSED CHILD! Tanning his backside with a ruler would not ever in my experience as an educator have resulted in any positive behavioural change. Ever. And please do not try to tell me that having someone whip or beat a child with a stick is a purging and beneficial thing. The only thing it would cause is hate towards the person who set the punishment - or, if the child is broken enough, you will end up with a well-behaved robot.

So,
rest of the chapter: Exceeds Expectations to Outstanding
child psychology: Dreadful to Troll...

I liked it! But I wish he had managed to take his money back from dumbledore or Snape n Lupin. I also would have liked to have heard from mr. nobody Weasley and what happened to granger.

Still, fairly enjoyable, thanks for writing!

The Dursleys go from one extreme to the other, don't they? While it is a good idea to eliminate a lot of extremely fatty or sugary foods, it's not a good idea to cancel them all. Fat is essential. People suffer and die from rabbit starvation even if they have lots and lots of rabbits to eat. People crave sugar. A good first step is reducing the amount of food, while keeping the composition mostly as usual, choosing fat reduced ingredients. Just fruit, salad, and vegetables don't work. It's like a divine mandate to secretly break the diet. OTOH, I like fruit. They have no fat at all. Like olives, or nuts, or avocados...

Congratulations, you managed to write a story, where the only true heroes are Ron and Hermione. After all, they were right, Sirius in your story corrupted Harry until he was worse than Voldemort. Protecting criminals, including murderers of his parents, and protecting them from punishment of all other crimes, makes both Sirius and Harry accessories to their crimes. Good ol’ Tommy was right, there is no good and evil, there is only power, and those too weak to seek it.

Is that what you meant, or I misunderstood you somewhere?

This is fabulous.

Fun story to read, i did not expect the ending there. Nicely done

Daaaaaannng. Do NOT mess with a Black. I'm glad Sirius got his (kind of harsh but still due) revenge. I'm super glad Harry has someone to care about him.

'This was the first time anybody had wasted my happy birthday verbally.'
Hagrid wished him..

This is seriously good, if you enjoy an unrepentant vengeful protagonist. Highly recommended.

Honestly, the way how Voldy was enslaved was pretty magnificent. I wonder why there are not more stories that do this? There are enough rituals and curses that allow someone to control the life of a person by using blood or hair, but having a piece of the actual soul of the target as a sacrifice for the magic? OP!
It should be quite 'easy' to control Voldy like this. Easier than actually killing him. First, because he is damn strong magical, and secondly because he isnt aware that anybody found out his secret.

That being said, I also liked the way you handled Sirius's desire for revenge. Lupin may be a good person, but he is a damn coward and you can't trust him to now flee and betray you when the situations become a bit uncomfortable. Dumbledore would sacrifice everyone without a second thought as long as it satisfies his 'Greater Good' bullshit. So, what happened to both was actually karma and nothing else.

Thanks for sharing the story!

Do you think my have to say about this is I understand why Remus was bashed but making him allies with Malfoy was going a little far Asher is the way you route Hermione confuses me I know a lot of people write her that way and it makes no sense to me unless it is during the sixth year

love it one of the best hp fanfiction out there

These kids are super-mutants, aren't they? Three trembling lower lips are to be expected with three students. Six pairs of eyes aren't. When three humans share twelve eyes among themselves then something is VERY creepy.

"This is a two-way mirror. I have the other pair."
Huh? Nobody refers to a single mirror as a pair. Pants are a pair. Mirrors are not. Your sentence makes no sense.