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really good. you should like totally right more. i loved feeding off of this insane madness. it gave me the thrill of excitement to paint my own blood on the walls. to paint smiles with blood on everyon's crying face. forcing them to smile in the crimson madness that is of my presence. i know my title says guest but im really \ you should check out my youtube and deviantart. plus be on look out for my account on this fanfiction net place. it seems to have interested me...so i might make one.

I really like this story. Please continue with it.

Love it! :D

Love this! Your writing style is extremely poetic! It's beautiful and I cannot wait for more! :D

can't wait til the next chap

It's really good so update soon!

You should totally write more.

Js.

Interesting story write more!

Its good so far and I agree with you, Toto (the one inside him) doesn't seem like the type to be able to feel love, so would that be obsession?

please update!

Woah, how you described that was...AWESOME! xD Red canvas, huh... Really great chapter, and Toto's...Toto! ;D I hope you update soon, sorry I got nothing to say bad about this or any mistakes~

This is really good! I love your writing style, it's so wonderful! This story is wonderful. I hope you update soon, and I hope we all get to read more of Toto and your OC(I like her personality, if it was displayed). ;D

Ooooooo I like this c: not much deadman wonderland stuff on here, and this is very good! Mockingbird is my favorite so I guess that makes it better haha. Your writing style is great as well! Already seems like this is going to be an interesting story. Update soon! C:

Wow. Simply captivating from the start. The character development dosen't seem that far fetched for a story of this genre. It's quite an interesting read. Can't wait for the next chapter when some of my many questions may finally be answered. Love it. Keep it up!

Since it is short, there isn't much for me to say - but you have me interested. The best thing about it thus far is your style of writing which really brings out the insanity of Deadman Wonderland as well as the chaos and bloodlust in your OC. I love the flow, which can be erratic at times but really seems to set the mood.

Curious to see where this leads. :)