this story was a mind-fk
absolutely love it

Wow, great story! Interesting idea and very well written. Thank you for posting!

Thank's for writing such a great story. I enjoyed it so much I have read it twice. This portrayel of Steve and his injuries was perfect.

Tasha

What a great ending. They now all have a purpose and a job, doing well, being friends. I truly enjoyed this story.

I think that should have been "The end?" since we know the governor wasn't all chocolates and roses.
Good story. I liked it. I look forward to more.

Thanks for that fantastic AU story. I really loved it. Hope you'll share another story soon.
Thanks or sharing

Is it wrong that I'm mad at you for finishing a story? I'm so sad that this story is over! Prequel or sequel maybe? (Hopeful emoticon)

Congratulations on finishing this story and it was a lovely ending indeed!

The way Governor Jameson was brought into the story?

Very nicely done.

Hey, I started reading this a couple of days ago and I've really enjoyed this different take on things, especially on Steve.
I'm glad I waited until it was finished to read however, I don't think I could have managed waiting for updates.
Great story, hopeful ending. Thanks

Danny just stumbling for words is so adorable. Danny is the last person you'd expect that from.

Aw. Kono and Steve are getting along. That's good. It's be very uncomfortable if Chin ever invited the both of them for dinner (or anything really) and all Kono did was glare at Steve.

I like the small changes you made to fit your 'verse.

Good for you, Steve.

You and your Ohana.

Hit the ground running.

Good.

awesome chapter

Riveting story, very exciting. I will hate to see this end. You have outdone yourself with this one.