Enjoyed!

I absolutely LOVED this story/series! The relationship between Sherlock and John is spot on and their interactions with Alice are too cute. I hope you'll continue this series in a new story!

Favorite line of the whole story? "Come back with our daughter, Sherlock!" I laughed so hard that my dog stared at me funny. And regarding my previous review, perhaps I should have been more specific because there were no instances where I could say definitely that Sherlock knows too much, it was just more of a feeling that I had through those two chapters. I apologize for the mix up XD

Anyway, you're perfectly back on the mark and I enjoyed the fluffy family crime fighting in Italy. Between Alice and Sherlock, John won't have any hair by the time he reaches his fifties. Poor John. And just think how our boys will react when Alice starts dating! OMGz, I have to stop or I'll laugh myself sick lol

Good work and I can't wait for the next fic ;)

-MysticValkyrie

Alice is a VERY good little fangirl x)

This chapter was sweet :3 and I appreciate being called eternally epic! 3

Have a happy day? Okay, I'll try that after I'm done flipping my sh*t! D:

MY EMOTIONS. MY. EMOTIONS.

Great story! The love for their daughter gives me goosebumps. FYI you used the word superstitously I think you meant seriptitiously and you say John's and I's chair...you mean John's and my chair. Cannot wait for more.

Finally! A story with a femme fatale, nice touch this. (the pool, where little Carl died... sorry, the pool scene popped into my head there!)

Great chapter.

Aw this story is great!

Keep it up please!

Your plot is intricate and interesting, however I wish you would switch to a third person pov every once in a while. A first person pov is very hard to write in for extended periods of time because the author tends to make the character he or she is writing in the view of omnipotent, and I noticed a lot of that in these two chapters. I also noticed that you lost a slight grasp of Sherlock's character, but I believe that can also be attributed to the first person pov.

-MysticValkyrie

So excited that you have a sequel! :D Please keep writing, I love reading about the family's development!

I haven't actually read this yet as I'm about to go to bed but THE NOISE I JUST MADE. OMG.

Proper review coming tomorrow. x)