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  Badger chapter 5 . 3/3/2019 Will this be continued? It's an amazing story and I'd love to ear more, even if it is just an epilogue. :) |
 Iggysthiccbrows chapter 5 . 6/2/2018 It's me again, here to correct some French! Instead of "amor" (which is Spanish, I believe.) in French, I'd be "amour" And "Italian" in French could either be "Italienne" or "Italien", but since Lovino is a boy, he'd be "Italien" BUT I DONT REALLY CARE I STILL HECKIN LOVE THIS MADTERPIECE OF S |
| Iggysthiccbrows chapter 2 . 6/2/2018 Hii! I really love your story, but I would like to correct your French! If you're trying to write; "He has finally fallen in love" then you'd use; "Il a enfin tombé en amour" Or, if you're just trying to say "he has fallen in love" you just take away the "enfin" Love this story, it's so cute! :D |
| mdmpinkie9088 chapter 5 . 3/28/2018 Pls... update... dying inside...need to know how it ends...pls? |
| gazal.blirf chapter 5 . 7/3/2017 A epilogue chapter sounds fantastic please do if you want to of course |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/10/2017 hurry up and update already |
| EKat2000 chapter 5 . 5/28/2016 An epilogue would be great. |
| Abnormallyshort chapter 5 . 1/31/2016 Um hello! Yes this is takeing to long! Please finish this masterpiece! Geez. Whats takeing you so long. |
| A.D.T chapter 5 . 1/17/2016 Can you please finish this?! It's sooooo AWESOME! |
| Horsemoon17 chapter 5 . 12/29/2015 Why!? It has been 3 years! Where is the next chapter!? Please update soon! |
| Shiznizzle chapter 5 . 12/3/2015 Write more or I will find u and SHAKE U LIKE A MILKSHAKE DGGFGHD8DHKEMEBEHWJISOZL |
| ZOMBEENINJA chapter 1 . 11/3/2015 Please continuuueee! |
| Zombeeninja chapter 5 . 11/3/2015 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS I REALLY GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/23/2015 I NEED MORE! IVE WAITED FOR A YEAR! IM JUST WAITING! PLEASE!? |
| Nightmare576 chapter 5 . 8/19/2015 I WANT MORE! THIS IS SO GOOD! |
