Dannnniiiiii this is my favourite one so far! I'm crying in Tiva feels, this was all so perfect! You are so talented 3

Fantastic fanfic. Tiva forever.

This is beautiful and well-written. You need to be careful about the use of "passed/past", and you tend to use "c/w/should of" when actually it's "c/w/should HAVE". Edwards and Evans were good, rounded OCs and this is incredibly tender in places. I like how you've handled the Tiva. :)

secret-keeping-dorky-haired-stupid-skiing-trip-big -eared-ass. That's funny.

Awwwwwww... :)

Stupendous! I think that's a good thing...

That was awesome! You couldn't ask for a better chapter. They should make this an episode.

I like the story so far I use to live in Alaska and I don't remember a marine or navy base there .. But there was a army and Air Force base

Truly amazing ending. It was one of those stories that puts a smile on your face. Thank you!

I love how Tony didn't correct the flight attendant and I also lov how neither Tony or Ziva are puling back from their feelings. They are allow themselves to feel for one another

I love how they stole kisses from one another at the bar when the other 2 detectives were still close by it really is true they couldn't get enough of one another.

I loved how they finally got together. It wasn't lust or desire in the traditional sense and happened haphazardly but finally a desire to be something more together. Awesome chapter.

James pushing Ziva to answer questions about her and Tony was a good way to tease out her feelings. It is interesting to see James as what Tony was like all those years ago. Great chapter

It says so much that he trusted her to stich his face. It speaks os much to the trust they have for one another. Great chapter.

Just found this story and I must tell you I loved this chapter and how it is progressing. I love how Tony became nervous as their friendship progressed. And the shaving scene was so intimate and sexy without being overtly sexy. Well done all around and a great chapter