Reviews for Surprise
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2017
That was great
Dee-Money chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
That was good great job on this luv the pair up your good writer u should write bleach lol great job keep up the great work
sailorlyoko4life chapter 1 . 8/31/2016
I loved it! I like that they had a real relationship instead of just the sex. And i liked how you called it kitten, it sounds less demeaning then the other word.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
this was so cute i loved it
D.T.A chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
give ichigo alucard as an inner spirit instead of zangetsu. bleach hellsing crossover
slayer007999 chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
AWSOME! This is the story i want about ichigo and rangiku they are the perfect match thankyou man please make more :) also i wish i lived in the anime world and i was ichigo caz i WANT rangiku myself
RJkimasako chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Interesting touch, having them already be in a relationship. not a bad lemon either!
Best regards, RJ Kimasako
Diesel91499 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Awesome story, you can definitely make ANY Rangiku Matsumoto & Ichigo Kurosaki coupling worth an ACTUAL fortune.
xSleepingforestx chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
heyy well i liked your story
i came up with an idea for soul society and karakura
a DRAGON HOLLOW! a hollow more stronger then vasto lord
few new characters as well.. Soul king in spirit form, and yamamoto haves a great grand son
the grand son trains Ichigo to become stronger then yamamoto :D
i aint good at writing but i am great with ideas
i love sharing ideas too
if you want more ideas (email:) message me
well enjoy
IchigoRangiku chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
HOT! HOT! HOOOT!

Anyways... did I mention it was hot?

You're a fantastic writer and I hope to read more Ichigo/Rangiku from you in the future.

Ichigo/Rangiku Forever!
Suave Jiraiya chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
What can I say? This is another totally awesome one-shot from you and how you write lemons so damn well, I'll never figure out.
KatzeNoel chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
loved it
mindmaster123 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
This is a excellent story; but in fact what Austin4 said is true, it's a pitty that is difficult to find a fanfic about this pairing
Hermes tonsils chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Wb man hope you can continue making more awesomr hahaha
Austin4 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
This was a solid fic. It's a shame that so few people are willing to write about this pairing, since I think it has potential.

My only complaint is that it could've been a touch fluffier. The story says that they love each other, but I don't really get that sense from reading their interactions. It almost seems like a purely physical relationship. Still, I'm happy with the fic and would encourage you to write more of the two if you're ever in the mood.
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