It would be wonderful if Haruhi truly felt this way. I do believe her obliviousness is self imposed as a defense mechanism. But I think that if someone were to pose things in the write manner, very directly so there are no misunderstandings, that she would be more open to considering her feelings more.

And for Mori to be the one to do such a thing would be wonderful because I do think they'd make the best couple.

Great work. Thank you for the story.

Oh. My. I loved this! I love how you captured how strong and calming Mori is and how he would silently swoop in to steal Haruhi's heart. You should make a sequel! Love it keep writing it was beautiful.

This story is sweet! I squealed like a giddy schoolgirl. That and I am obsessed with Mori-Sempai

Awe, you did such a great job with this. I'm genuinely sad there isn't more of it. You wrote the characters wonderfully and the story was enjoyable from beginning to end.

kawaii

Awesome story! I freaking love this couple! Please make more Mori/Haru!
:)

That was completely sweet. I love it!

This was a fantastic Mori/Haru fic.I think you did a wonderful job writting it and I really enjoyed it.

Toe curling feels... People need to quit writing such great fanfiction... This was fantastic... You captured Mori perfectly...

That was good, I liked the writing style. You sounded like a real author with your thought process, very well written. Makes you think, I like the plot, it's different. Keep going!

You did a grear job!

~Hitachiin~

Charming Haru/Mori fic.

Oh my god! I absolutely loved this... You should make a sequel! Seriously, cause this is amazi,g.

Awh, that was cute. Good job!

I adord it

You did great not rushed at all and they were quite in character