I would like to say that I absolutely loved this first-year story with Harry and Draco. Your writing is very entertaining and kept me reading late into the night. I'm kind of worried though that you haven't updated the next (second year) one in quite some time, so I will not start with it, because there is nothing worst then forever waiting. But just so you know, in my view your writing is better then most!

That was real nice of Minerva!

It's a relief to Sevvie that Lucius has admitted that he did not enjoy being tied with the Dark Lord! As I'm also sure that he himself made the mistake of his life joining Him.

I'm sure that Dumbles tried REAL hard to pick Harry's brain! Poor kid!

Excellent story and original take on a plot line that can easily cliched. Definitely recommended.

I think you should have gotten him a snake.

I have to wonder why if the Bloody Baron lived and died in the 11th century he's running around in 18th century garb and wig in the film. I love Olivia's reaction to Draco telling her Severus is their godfather. I like her character.

I had a lot of fun reading this story. Very Slytherin of you to leave us dangling with a cliffy. It guarantees we will all flock to the sequel. A second stone, and Flamel returned it to them after verifying it is real.
How intriguing...
I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Nice story ! I like it a lot.
PS : The correct translation for "Ah! Old friend... Let's see what we have here... " is "Ah ! Mon vieil ami... Voyons voir ce que nous avons là... " (I am French)

Hello I am not good in english so I will just say that for the names of Lucius and Severus it is Abraxas and Tobias and ont Aurelius and septimus. I don't know for other but for me " ça me sort complètement de l'histoire". Ho ! And in charter 3, when you write "Ah! Old friend... Let's see what we have here...
You should translate this sentence in "Voyons voir ce que l'on a ici" It would be more fluid.
Your story is realy good and I am sure that I have made more error in this comment than you in your whole story haha
I wish you good luck in the future. Continue a écrire ton histoire est vraiment chouette et unique

Wait, is this finished?

h and d are the most stupid slytherins in all history i think.

I really enjoyed this story. Harry goes to the Malfoy at age 5. He’s properly educated and bonds with the family.

At one level it is a heart warming family story (so far through the end of year 1). On another, there is a harsh undercurrent of preparation for war.

Harry and Draco’s interactions are wonderful. They are true siblings. I very much got a Roland and Oliver vibe from the two of them.

Lucius was the star of the show. He’s a great dad to Harry. But he’s also a manipulator who intends to milk the political benefits of having the Boy Who Lived as a son for all its worth. He’s also a cruel and ruthless soldier who has decided to oppose Voldemort, for the good of his family and society (in that order). As he correctly observes, all Dumbledore’s followers will do when Voldemort returns is die. A third party is necessary.

I really enjoyed the story and hope the author continues to write.

Actual quel petit gamin translates,according to the wiki, as ‘what a little kid

I thought the mix of AU into this story was great, really enjoyed reading it. Love the Malfoys!
Although disappointed there’s no more or a sequel? Doesn’t seem finished