sooo good :)

Aw, this was so sad! But very nicely written. Great work!

This is exactly what I was thinking when I watched the film. You have eloquently captured such a heartbreaking scene. Thank you for sharing!

This was magnificent. Very nicely done. This was one of my favorite scenes as well as the one I cried the most during. You did it justice and I applaud you on a job well done. There were only a few minor errors that I noticed like a few missing words near the beginning. Besides that this fic was flawless. You captures Snape's feelings perfectly.

Thank you so much for this entertaining and heart wrenching story.

Sincerely,

DragonGirl323

I really don't know what to say... That was beautiful. I'm crying...

Oh I loved this! You wrote and distinguished Snape's feelings perfectly, as well as his actions from when he found Lily's lifeless body before him, just like the film, but in your own way.

I say you matched his emotions perfectly here. It was such a heart-wrenching scene, when I saw this yesterday. Alan Rickamn portrayed Snape beautifully in this scene of the Prince's tale. Heck, the whole thing! And you wrote it beautifully here. It brings the memories back of watching this and picturing his emiotions as you displayed them here.

I can say: Beautiful.

Great job. :)

I saw the film today and cried so much as this heartbreaking scene - much to the amazement of my friends who just don't get how saddening this is or how much Severus loved Lily. You wrote this beautifully, so sad and damn it you've made me cry at it again! Brilliant work.

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Oh god...you've gone and made me tear up! Again. I started crying right before The Prince's Tale in the movie (for obvious reasons) but this part made me completely lose it. Lovely writing, you've really captured the moment and all his emotions. Sad, but good work.

Oh wow. That was really well done. When I read; "Always" at the end, it was just too much for me. Very touching.

OH GOD. The memories of that part in the movie...you're gonna make me cry again!

Other than a few run-on sentences, this was great. The emotion was spot-on, and I could very easily picture the scene (although I'm not sure that was very smart of me to do :P)

Gosh...I'm gonna go cry myself to sleep now... xP

Oh my gosh this is amazing but so sad! I'm bawling:( And I was crying SOOO hard at that part at the midnight showing last night! OMG! But this was amazing and could have very well been what was going through his mind;) Good work!

I remembered the scenes while I read this, and now I'm just like OH GOD LET ME DIE, this is so perfect and sad.

You captured this shit so well, SHAKING AND CRYING TBH.

Beautiful one shot. The Prince's Tale part was my favorite part in all 8 of the movies, and this was the scene that made me cry (harder, becuase I was already crying when Snape died). I can imagine that this is what Snape was feeling when he saw that Lily had died. Nice work :)

oh my goodness, this moved me. I absolutely love it...

And I'm very jealous that you got to watch the midnight premiere... it took me til 1 o'clock in the afternoon to realize today was the 15th and Harry potter came out. I can't watch it until, like, next week. D';

I really want to watch the part where Harry watches Snapes memories, I loved that part in the book.

This was a great story. :]

Oh this is just so sad and beautiful.. perfectly captures the emotion of the scene... excellent job.