OH MY GOD! Please come back. I am HOOKED! I need more. This is so great.

please give me more. your Shepard is vibrant and alive.

You being alive is a highlight of my week.

LOVE THIS STORY!

Cant wait for the next chapter:)

i'm still following you, and I still love your writing :)

What I would like, though, is more Joker-Shepard interaction. The action from the game is alright, but I love your originality and the story you have going on simultaneous to the original one, and it would be so awesome to see more of it. I may be wrong, of course, but that is my immediate feeling ;)

All my best, and I really don't hope this puts you down in any way.

Very nice SB being done, should come in handy for finding Billy for sure.

Nice jabs about getting Shep to take lessons from Joker. :)

Oh god, Billy using Daniel as a hostage maybe? That won't end well for him.

Ah, that's an interesting idea of how TIM would have liked Shep to awaken, makes sense as well thinking about it. :)

~Lordy

Ooh part one of the Shadow Broker done. Makes sense to get him now actually for this plot line, something tells me the SB resources will be needed to find Billy.

~Lordy

very adorable and about bloody time! :P

One question, though; They fall asleep in the mess hall? -Seems unpractical and uncomfortable, as well as very exposing to me ;)

Love the chapter, and hope to see more as usual ;)

Aww, all she needed was someone to cuddle in order to sleep properly. :)

Nice way of showing the emotion, looking forward to how you carry it on. :)

~Lordy

This chapter had me on the edge of my seat in the beginning and my eyes wet with tears at the end. Definitely one of the best ones I've read of anyone's work.

Very much worth the wait. :)

This story veers between sweet and chilling, and this chapter is the best possible example of that. The ending... *sigh*. Very, very sweet. "I'll even promise not to draw on your face" just *made* it.

Still very, very nice.

Since you and ShadesOfMauve are basically my Shoker inspirations at the moment, I'm hoping this'll get me out of my writer's block.

Anyway, great story, good work, keep on going! Since your chapters are *always* good, I'm starting to feel like a broken record over here. :)

great story so far, can't wait to see what happens next. loving the back and forth of jokers stolen hat.