Reviews for Making the Dead Smile
White Hime chapter 3 . 4/18/2012
love the story, and KainXZero is one of my most favorite pairing too, although I love KanameXZero more, hehehehe, please continue!
fghfgdfgd chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
awww cute! i really should be writing my own fic, but yours was so good, I just had to read it I can't wait for the net chapter!
mochiusagi chapter 3 . 8/3/2011
Hmmm interesting, why do I have a feeling that the scrunched up piece of paper is important? Please update soon!
sweetdisaster chapter 3 . 7/31/2011
So so hot. A perverted rock star & a temperamental and indepenent artist. Can't wait update soon
f000se chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
I usually dont go for AU stories, but your summary really intrigued me and I'm very happy that it did (: Your story sounds amazing so far, and I cant wait to read more!
Atheist1 chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
Ooh... This is good. I liked how Kaname shamelessly admitted he's making a pass at Zero. LOL!

More please.
yaoifanatic92 chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
very nice i cant wait to read more. wish i could see a pic of kaname half naked. zero is lucky he gets to draw it.
LuanRina chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
Forgot to say. This one: ". . .that he was needed as mediator – a go between, a gopher. . .an owl from Hogwarts." ROFLMFAO An owl from Hogwards! ! ! !Buwahhaha! ! ! XD OMG you have NO idea how hard you made me laugh here XD I damn adore this way of thinking that Zero-chan has XD And truly, this chapter was amazing. Once again, please update as soon as you only can, dearest! *_*
LuanRina chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
Yay for the awesome update! Gawd, the length of it is great, I really love long chapters, so I sincerely thank you for making this one longer! :D

Enjoyed reading about Zero-chan's past - I was actually curious to see some bits of it *nods* They made me adore him all the more btw and OMG that picture you described was AMAZING! I really wouldn't mind seeing such a masterpiece u_u

Muhhaha! Oh GAWD, Kaname-sama, you shameless Devil! XD Teasing Zero-chan like that and even daring to check him and his tempting ass out XD Can't say I mind or don't understand though ;9 But truly, Zerorin's reaction was so cute! X3 Especially when Kaname-sama said he wouldn't apologize for doing it XD

The Zerorin's simile about the ice-cream and then this one: "Do you want to look smug, or do you want to look like a girl's wet dream? Jesus." was simply hilarious XD I totally laughed my ass off at those moments - they're both so funny and pleasant to read, as well as many others *hums appreciatively* It's also very nice to see our dear boys communicate like that (as well as devilishly smirking Kaname-sama and annoyed Zero-chan XD )

Muffufuu~so Zerorin gets to draw Kaname-sama's perfect divine self in nude, huh? ;9 Soooo can't wait to see *smirks*

"Oh, for f#k's sake." - now that reaction was freaking BRILLIANT! XD Not to mention SO Zero-chan! :D

Awwww the last part with Kaname-sama was so sweet! I totally love it when Kaname-sama carries Zero-chan bridal style! *_* Plus seeing him so careful and caring is wonderful - and I really liked reading Kaname-sama's POV *nods happily* Can't help wondering where Kaname-sama saw that sketch he picked up though *thoughtful*

Totally CRAVING, YEARNING, LONGING FOR MORE! ! ! ! !X3 Please update super ASAP! :D
Scioneeris chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
Awww! LOL. That just ended on a really, really sweet note!

Very interesting flashback into Zero's younger years, I love that he carried around a little book and that his first instance of an unseen was something so tragic and bittersweet. It seems that so many wonderful artistic things are always borne out of some sort of immense pain, which is rather sad when I think about it. Eh. I'm rambling.

Good chapter!

I had to laugh at Kaname's "Humming" That just cracked me up, it was hilarious and SO Kaname right there. Teehee. Great job! _

Oooh and love the detail of the sketch that he pilfered. I can't wait see how that's going to factor in later. Nicely done! _
ben4kevin chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
can't wait, for the nude sketch.
Eyes17k chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
Hehehehehe Kaname's quite forward LOL I particularly like Zero's "grilling" Kaname: "don't laugh when i compare you to an ice cream" XDDDDDDD

Takuma is the owl from Hogwarts! YAAAYYY XDD
LuanRina chapter 2 . 7/19/2011
Ahhaha XD Kain&Zero-chan scenes were so funny and sweet and damn HOT at the same time! It was very interesting and enjoyable to read them. Dialogs are good and natural too *nods* Oh and the sex. . .Aaah that was simply mind-blowing and squeal&nosebleed-evoking! Not to mention unimaginably HAWT! X3 *fans herself* Plus I adore it when Zerorin is being so naughty and seductive X9 It was simply irresistible *muffufu*

Kain's notes in the morning so made me LOL here btw XD Especially the second one, and this part: "Kain (A.K.A the best lay you've ever had)" LMFAO

Haha XD Oh Takuma - he was really hilarious to see in this one, especially his interaction with Zerorin XD And awww Zero-chan is just so Zero-chan! His attitude is as adorable as ever XD

Kaname-sama's behavior is very intriguing to me too btw. Wonder what he is thinking about, but it seems he is having fun already XD

Can't wait to read the next one! PLEASE UPDATE SUPER ASAP! :D
LuanRina chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Muhhaha XD Oh my, that's just so Zero-chan! I totally love him as an artist (it suits him in my opinion) and that banter he had with Takuma, and his attitude - it was just charming! Truly enjoyed the start *nods delightedly*

The idea seems very interesting. I also love some Kain x Zero-chan action before it turns into Kaname-sama x Zero-chan X9 You got me totally hooked here ;3
bloody child chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
I liked every moment of it! Their meeting is interesting XD! And Zero has all the reasons in the world to be pissed: what Kaname is so happy for? I can't wait to read the next chapters
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