| Reviews for Stand and Deliver |
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   archangel69 chapter 4 . 10/6/2012 Beautiful story, damage to have had no warm and hot scenes(stages) between 3 |
| LianneZ4 chapter 4 . 10/19/2011 Interesting, not bad at all. The "Peter and El falling in love with Neal" part was quite rushed, but otherwise I enjoyed it. Nice work. |
| Aislinn Graves chapter 4 . 8/1/2011 Marvelous story, very richly detailed. Well done! :) Aislinn |
| Aislinn Graves chapter 2 . 8/1/2011 I really like how you have made each character themselves but still fit into the world as well. A very delicate balancing act that you have done quite well. :) Aislinn |
| Aislinn Graves chapter 1 . 8/1/2011 ROTFL. What a cheeky bugger he is. :) Ok 1: Fabulous AU. I love seeing characters put into a new scenario. 2. Very richly detailed. Your descriptions are awesome. I love the use of slang and thank you for the definitions. 3. Love the reworking of the plot, it fits perfectly in your world but is familiar enough to really feel like them. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story. :) Aislinn |
| AliWC chapter 4 . 7/13/2011 Ah, this was a nice long chapter. Unfortunately it was also the end. Thank you for sharing this Au with us. It helps sell the fantasy that no matter where Neal and Peter are in life they are bound to find each other! Very eventful and interesting! Written well, and presented well! A fantastic addition to WC FFN! |
| robingal1 chapter 4 . 7/12/2011 This was fantastic. I was so apprehensive about reading an AU, but then I immediately saw what a talented author you are. Your glossary alone completely assured me that this is a story that i HAVE to read! Thank you so much. I look forward to seeing what else you write! |
| Shadow Cat17 chapter 4 . 7/12/2011 I so loved this! |
| Solaris10 chapter 4 . 7/12/2011 I loved it you should write more like it! |
| SerialChick chapter 4 . 7/12/2011 This story was absolutely amazing. Poor Neal had a bit of a hard time though. I wonder how that will affect his relationship with Peter, after all, it's all his fault! I loved how you included all the different characters, and Jones and Diana as siblings made me laugh. Mozzie was as awesome as always and Elizabeth rocked. Well done, I really enjoyed it. You writing was descriptive and well laid out with three dimensional characters. Keep up the good work! can't wait for the sequel! (see what I did there? trying to pressure you into writing more.) |
| God of Laundry Baskets chapter 3 . 7/11/2011 OH man, you really are updating this rather quickly - not that I mind at all. I mean I am really enjoying this story. Can't wait to see where you take it. It's just usually I have to wake at least a week to get my next fix. hehe I'm glad your muse is feeding you well. :D Can't wait to see what happens next. |
| AliWC chapter 3 . 7/11/2011 Good chapter: realistic. Looked forward to it all day, thanks for the fast update :D I half expected Peter to check Neal's gun and find that he'd never used bullets. I'm enjoying the way the story is unfolding! |
| niagaraweasel chapter 2 . 7/11/2011 The first two chapters were very nice. I hope you're not going to stop now that things are starting to get really interesting... ;-). |
| kchan1 chapter 2 . 7/11/2011 Nooooooooooo! Don't leave it there! Continue! |
| Shadow Cat17 chapter 2 . 7/10/2011 I am really enjoying this story! |
