So what happened to the humans that soundwave was useing did they start believing nest and the autobots and started helping them.

hi. I'm only 13 and I think your style is based more for adult readers, but I still really like your ideas and execution of them. Also I know of a really good author, SimpleRhapsody, who has written the story "Twisted" for Transformers. I think you will enjoy hear writing much.

I love the scenario you have come up with to allow Ironhide to survive. I hope you write more stories of this AU timeline, even if they don't exactly center around Ironhide. Its really refreshing and a welcome changed compared to a vast run of the mill sometimes spewed out on . I hope you take this into consideration. I'd love to see more of what would come after the ending of this fic.

Beautiful.

Thank you.

A very unique and detailed story a pleasure to read.

Well, how I didn't notice the updates is beyond me...

But I finished it! and I must say, this story is awesome.

Megatron is Megatron, a mech who values nothing but his own power. Other troops would be expendable, even Soundwave. And sparring with his brother Optimus fit his character.

Tight chapter with suspense and action, adding in Sarah and Annabelle. Creative on the codes and the humans trying to work against them. Though if Ironhide was that thorough he would have had Sarah learn a few defensive moves. Or Will would have taught his wife some.

Cliffie with a suicide bomber. Too bad they always focus on their own pain, thinking pain on someone else will ever solve anything. Only made her a tool for the Cons.

Sorry for the late reviews, tied up with work and family.

Ahh, Ratchet and his threats. Creative and yet dangerous enough no bot or no one is going to challenge him. A good offset to Ironhide and his mannerisms.

Soundwave is so evil and uses the excuse of following orders. You did good detailing on the why and reasoning of the human cell group. Kept them human even in their hatred of the Autobots.

Mikeala waking up agasint Prime's chestplates almost makes what she went through worth it. Would love the cuddling, not the way she got there. And possible plot teaser or even its own mini fic. Ratchet wondering how she might be changing with the treatment and exposure to Prime's spark and matrix energies.

Oh! Slagged off Prime! Its face tearing aft kicking out of my way boy! Time.

Holy S**t! I was so busy I completely forgot about these chapters you guys posted! I AM SOOOO SORRY! so i will get on these! haha when i read your notes at the bottom how you described the cohort bonds, That is exactly what i was thinking what you guys meant! hehe I am proud of myself for that '

Awwwwww1 That is just the most adorable thing. Do you plan on doing more with this? I love this story and must admit I would sorely miss it were it to end.

Beatiful, beautiful. An excellent fic, I love the end. I like the definition of cohort, if one day I do a fic of TF hope that it should not bother you if I use her ... although you will have to read in Spanish :p

Perfect ending~!

And I hope there's a follow-up. There are so many jucy plot hooks left now.

LOVED IT~!

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A perfect ending. _

Sorry, that's all I can actually articulate of it. Seriously though, this series was awesome, with an ending as strong as its start.

Do you hear that sound? It's the sound of my mind being BLOWN.

On another note, shortly after witnessing the horror that was Ironhide's death in TF3, I ventured onto the internet (and more specifically, here on ) to find ressurection fics to fuel my denial (as I had done after TF1 with Jazz). ONLY to find slim to none...Slim being this masterpiece.

This baffles me, as I thought this death scene would specifically tug at fangirl's hearts across the world. Recently I have found an answer to this question; THIS fic is so amazing and astounding that no other ressurection fic could hold a candle to it. It's like the first jewelry in the human race. You and Merfilly put out a stunning gold crown encrusted with diamonds while other writers are still working with beaten copper. [Badmetaphorisbad]

10,000 characters can't describe my love of this story, and I can hope you'll be alright with me having it on my e-reader as I can hardly go a day without reading it. And in the future when TF3 comes out on DVD, I will need this little beauty to make me feel better as I watch poor Hide die again and again...

This story is pure love/win.

You two are gods.

I worship you.

:D

That is all.

And so one chapter (in the life of our favorite Cybertronians) ends and another begins. A very satisfying story! I wonder what Megatrons response would have been to an invitation to the party. I'll bet he could "cut a rig" as well as anyone else...maybe?

Another excellent story and a much better ending that we receivesd from the movie.