nice. this is one of the best Bruce Wayne/ Clark Kent I have read here. your style of writing is easy to follow and you know how to set a scene. i know it's been a while since you've posted anymore, but i would really like to read this through. no pressure though. Cheers.

Nice story, I'm just sorry it hasn't been continued.

Your story is really interesting, and I hope to find out how Bruce's stay on the farm is in the next chapter. I especially like the Mustang, being a huge fan of them myself, (hoping to hear mroe about it) and you'd notice if you read my story "Cyclotron" (by Super-hero Fan) in the Comics/Spiderman section of the site. (I recommend it!) Good work on your story so far, I'm looking forward to new chapters!

Good, good. You had better continue this story! Please? Pretty please? :)

Okay, this is great. I love stories that bring in Bruce Wayne - it's one of my favorite Smallville subgenres. But that's not what made me click the review button. This line is:

Jonathan: "When I was a kid I used to have an old Charger. She could have flown if she had wings."

Bwa ha ha! Yeah, you sure did. And the horn played Dixie, too. ;) Cool stuff; can't wait for the rest of it.

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Cool story... What's next? I can't wait!

This is wonderful! Keep going. Lex needs to make an appearance. And have Clark and Bruce find out each other's secrets.

Very very good. Not many crossovers work. This one flows well.

Very very good. I look forward to the next part. (And if you were interested, the only spelling mistake I could find was 'dessert'.)

Cool. Just cool!

That was the best story I ever read in my whole life! It was awesome! Superman is awesome and so is this Jonesy fellow ;)

I like your story. I love the stories with a younger Bruce Wayne.

I really enjoyed that and I am looking forward to seeing the next chapter. Thanks!

I loved it! YAY!

hey wow this my first review and i must say this fiction was excellent