The way that last chapter ended almost felt as though there should be another chapter perhaps an epilogue to bring all of the thoughts and lines and intersecting bits of information together in one farewell chapter but that is my opinion and if you don't like it that's your prerogative

It was good read, well written.
However there was some strange choice of words in a couple instances. And in my opinion, the whole lunatic escaped from prison just made my skin crawl and not in a nice way. It simply felt unnecessary. It would have made a better story if it was Olivia taking care of a injured Alex and them growing closer. The last few chapters were hard to enjoy cuz you knew he could pop and harm them at any time, in turn making the ending feel extremely rushed. Merely my opinion, no disrespect intended

Thank you for a wonderful story, I really enjoyed it!

WOW!Thank You for a GREAT story. Would love a sequal.

Wow, that was so sweet and beautiful and perfect.

I really really love this story. What an incredible story line. Also I really like your writing style, I love the great details and descriptions of what Alex and Olivia feel. I love that you put in some humor as well as all the beautiful and heartbreaking drama. That last sentence is a perfect ending.

You really did a great job! Keep up the great writing!

- Janne

I just can't believe how good this story is, I love it so so so so much! I wish there would be a Law and Order SVU movie adaptation of this. I wanna see Mariska and Stephanie do all of this and have all of these dialogues. It's perfect!

Now I'm quickly going to read on, can't wait any longer

-Janne

I can't believe I didn't find this story any earlier! I only got to chapter 3 right now, but I just wanted to let you know how much I love this story and this chapter especially. I love the stories where Olivia and Alex are only just starting to show their love for each other, and you wrote it in such a sweet beautiful way. I love the way they unconsciously show their love for each other. I can't wait to get back from work to read the next chapter!

-Janne

Fantastic story, I loved it.

Excellent freaking job! I appreciate how you pay attention to details, specifically the ones that have to do with the motivations of the characters. Yes, we come to find out why Alex throws herself out there-I was surprised by that move, and I congratulate you for it!-but also the motivations for why characters do little things, like kiss a certain spot or choose a set of clothes. And excellent job with the smexy time as well. )

Hm. This is excellent.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Well done! Frankly, I get very distracted by poor grammar. Thank you for proofing, et cetera, and really getting it right. (Just one teeny, tiny correction ... If goes with were, not was. Common mistake, but you seem like the kind of gal that seeks perfection). Thanks again for such a lovely adventure!

Nice story! I really liked how you built their relationship!

Ohh!

First of all Sorry for the late review... my job has been hectic! But here I am ;)

I can't believe it's over! :(

I'm gonna miss this story so much!

It was nothing that I was imagined but surprisingly much better :D

I love the end just as much as I LOVE the entire fic!

It is a really complete fic... with drama, humor, romance, everything!

Fantastic! I think you have a great gift and you are very talented writing!

So I'm looking foward for your next Long Story full of Drama and Romantic Scenes! :P

Thank you!

Oh.. And if you are still on hollidays Enjoy your free time! Have Fun!

Hope to hear from you soon! (or read I mean)

I LOVED THIS! Great story! Lots of character interaction and relationship building and sexy scenes! But some crime thrown in for dramatic effect! lol! Keep up the good work! look forward to more stories in the future!

Sad that a beautiful story already ended. :(

Amazing story ! Fantastic ending !

Please tell Alex not to do it again? Even if i love her so much i will be the one to tell Liv to kill her herself. But of course, the weapons would be something that would cause death through excessive pleasurable sensations. ;).

So, do we have another one coming from you? Girl can't get enough.

Your stories are amazing...You are amazing !

THANK YOU SO VERY VERY MUCH !