| Reviews for Independence |
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shadowsontherun chapter 1 . 1/6/2012 Aw jim i can't wait to see your prank! Mccoy always had the most colourful language! |
FORD B chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 A truly great and ever so funny read! The burning dance was hilarious! |
Space-Case-Writer13 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011 You've Done it again Gix. And While I was skeptical that you would be able to pull off a "ficlet" You have indeed done so with the grace and beauty expected from you and your writing. I loved the voices of the different characters which you characterized perfectly in this fic and I could almost hear Jim's yelps over the 1812 overture. Well done. Thanks for A wonderful read. Can't wait for more. Spacie |
bookdragon01 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011 A delightful piece for the 4th - thank you. |
laureas chapter 1 . 7/4/2011 Wow! Nice job with this one, Gix! Jim looking like something the cat wouldn't drag in is definitely a bonus. Add the s'mores and you've got a classic. laureas. |
Anasazi Darkmoon chapter 1 . 7/4/2011 lol! He played the world's smallest violin for Jim? What'd he play, "My Heart Bleeds Purple Piss for You"? XD Dude, this was seriously hilarious, though I have no idea what a Juicy Lucy is...it sounds vaguely pornographic, though. :P Awesome job! |