Reviews for Independence
shadowsontherun chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Aw jim i can't wait to see your prank! Mccoy always had the most colourful language!
FORD B chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
A truly great and ever so funny read! The burning dance was hilarious!
Space-Case-Writer13 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
You've Done it again Gix. And While I was skeptical that you would be able to pull off a "ficlet" You have indeed done so with the grace and beauty expected from you and your writing. I loved the voices of the different characters which you characterized perfectly in this fic and I could almost hear Jim's yelps over the 1812 overture. Well done. Thanks for A wonderful read. Can't wait for more.

Spacie
bookdragon01 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
A delightful piece for the 4th - thank you.
laureas chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Wow! Nice job with this one, Gix! Jim looking like something the cat wouldn't drag in is definitely a bonus. Add the s'mores and you've got a classic.

laureas.
Anasazi Darkmoon chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
lol! He played the world's smallest violin for Jim? What'd he play, "My Heart Bleeds Purple Piss for You"? XD Dude, this was seriously hilarious, though I have no idea what a Juicy Lucy is...it sounds vaguely pornographic, though. :P

Awesome job!