| Reviews for Two for One |
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  nigger chapter 1 . 4/28 nigger |
 WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 10/17/2019 A hot one-shot here! |
| RoryDomino chapter 1 . 12/14/2018 this started off pretty good however the actual acts were disappointing. Especially with the way you the characters. Parvati would have been the one to prefer doggy style. Also, the way you wrote her, she would have preferred watching the virgins take each others flower so that she could show Harry how it's really done. As a woman I know for a fact that if Padma had desired Harry the way she did, she would not have wanted to lose her virginity in the doggy position. She would have wanted to look at Harry. Saying that his unit touched her womb is very unbelievable. Otherwise, decent smut story |
| Azrael chapter 1 . 11/27/2018 Had me until the doggy style. Thats not a proper way for him to have taken her flower. He should have nailed the sluttier of the two that way and taken the virgin missionary. Done it right. Why wasnt there more boob sucking? Couldve been longer |
| Blake2020 chapter 1 . 6/12/2018 nice |
| Charry forever chapter 1 . 6/5/2018 damn that was fucking hot, Harry you are a lucky dude man. sometimes I wish this would happen in the books and the movies |
| Korin Dragoon chapter 1 . 12/26/2017 I'd like to see a continuation of this to see if the girls got pregnant or not and how they handled the fall out and if they added anyone else to the harem. Do you have a version of this one that follows Hermione? |
| DontMindMe chapter 1 . 10/16/2017 Well that was steamy. I will admit i would enjoy reading how this would continue |
| vampdreams chapter 1 . 8/6/2017 Oh, I'm sure the girls could get used to him too Good one _ Maybe Hermione will join them later? |
| te.nellis chapter 1 . 7/22/2017 Lol that was great. |
| biobicfalconr chapter 1 . 7/12/2017 I was wondering if you ever planned on continuing this story with more chapters or a sequal? Cuz i loved this and would love to see more added to it |
| hogwartsfan1 chapter 1 . 5/22/2017 enjoyable. fun to think the bookgirl getting it in the rear end haha |
| HottieRickyRozay chapter 1 . 5/2/2017 it was a great one shot and I hope you do more also you might wanna do a harem one full of twins n just make it a romance and smut were he helps and his reward is twins of different kind that have loved him but needed the right moment to tell him oh btw you got Ron spot on in character |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2017 Hermione and Padma should FUCK! I have had sex and I am 14! |
| Phillies2 chapter 1 . 11/26/2016 The only thing I could see wrong was how he was hard again for Padma after cumming in Parivati. Other then that great One Shot story |
