Honestly, Incest is okay to some levels. Genetically, it's wrong, but I find this very nice. It's better than *cough* other couples that I have come to detest recently so Wincest it is. Just not the whole Father Daughter and Mother Son thing. That's weird. Sibling and cousin are okay I guess. BTW, I am normal. I like other girls that are not my family. Hell, I hate my family so don't attack me about having incest-type relationships with others. Regardless, a very good one-shot. I hope to read more of your work.

Another Very good story congratulation

Bwen forever

nice fanfic!

Good one-shot

While there are a few errors, this is a really good oneshot. You shine when writing romance, no matter the what the pairing is. My only real critique is that some of the sentences seem to go on a bit long. They're not exactly run-on sentences, but you might want to take a look at it. Keep at it!

Forever in the Sky,

The Red Star

i thought it was kinda cute but i didn't like the ending. i was hoping she would say that she loves him back. i hope you write a sequel for this.

good luck

PS: i see on your profile that you wrote 221 stories in total and that's very impersive. good job)

Very good. I think they were in character enough. Nicely done.

Dude this is more of a t than a m. Nice job though.

ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!

I noticed a few mistakes, but for me a fanfic isn't about perfect grammar, spelling, etc. Or even a slow "build up of the plot" it's about how much I enjoyed reading it! And I really enjoyed reading this story Kyuubi. Bravo, and keep up the good work my friend. -Anodite.

This story is well made

What I like about you is that you always seem to do a good job of "covering the bases." You gave logical reasons as to why Ben and Gwen's relationships with Julie and Kevin have come to a halt. Also, I like the handle you have on the characters. You captured some of the original magic. Since its all fan interpretation, I don't think any of us fans of Ben 10 will ever truly know how the Tennysons truly feel about each other. You do their romance very well and I hope you'll allow me the honor of reading more of your stories in the future. Keep rockin

I have a feeling this is going to be a great story! Keep on rockin!

Very good oneshot. Thank you.

Hey to this. Romance is your thing, not smut, not action. Work on this, you're damn good at it.