Reviews for Perish Song
MickeyMouse34 chapter 1 . 4/29/2019
This was a really good story. The style of writing is really good and you did a good job giving us readers empathy for the Absols. I don't blame em for being mad, I'd be mad if my home was taken away too. Good short story. I enjoyed it.
vagabundohusky chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
This is sad, I like the absols, I would immediately understand if i see a absol in real life
dragonstorm24 chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
This is amazing.
Reevee21 chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
That's how you summarize an Absol in one chapter. Well done.
Shadow Snivy chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
This was sweet. You really conveyed the emotions that an absol can feel, and it isn't just the misunderstanding all Pokemon seem to have with them ('that absol are dangerous, not trying to warn but to hurt'). There's the sacrificing you added, which in all ways is true. Absol seem to go out of their way to warn Pokemon of impending disasters despite the hate, even with the risk of them getting hurt.
You added how they left areas for the other Pokemon, which I find the most tragic part here, with Pokemon still hating them. "To force us into the deserts where we will overheat with our thick fur?" This part is my favorite. Absol are looked down upon. Pokemon, they are trying to help you, not annihilate you.
The story of an absol can always be extraordinary if you write it correctly. I haven't read many of them yet, but I must say this is one of the best. The poetic sense you add, the original chapter title, and that ending... beautiful.
I hope you make more great stories like this in the future. :)
OseanSoldier chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Great little short story. It is rather simple yet elegant at the same time. Once again, great job!
Four Leafed Fortune chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
This makes me so sad for all the absols. Just wow. You did a great job!
Violentshadow chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Great job...
Species Unknown chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
****, this is AMAZING! i love Absol and i am glad that someone has FINALLY voiced what they/me are/am thinking. *looks down* isn't that right Midnight?
Midnight: *nods*
Cor: *shouting from the other room* JASON 1! GET OFF MY COMPUTER!
Hey, there's a reason we're called "Species Unknown"
Dewdrop of DiamondDust chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
I really, really love this story!
Wish Writer chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
NOOOOOOOOOO! Absol! I love you and all dark types!Please dont die! :,(
Dividing By Zero chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Beautiful, especially because Absol is my favorite Pokemon. It captures the feelings of them very well, and I like the semi poetic style of it, as well as the title. Good job!
Widdiful Echidna chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
This is cool, simple but engaging. Nice!