| Reviews for The City of Love |
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NoShitSherlock123 chapter 2 . 10/5/2011 please, please, please update soon i'm loving the story so far and want to read moore xxx |
OffMyTea chapter 2 . 7/1/2011 Me loves! Update soon! |
CitrusObsessed chapter 2 . 6/30/2011 I GOT A SHOUTOUT! Yay :) ROFL, I wonder who the HeadBoy is? ;) |
LadyLissaLight chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 I started reading this, then got to the part about what Hermione was wearing. I then stopped. |
OffMyTea chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 update! please! like, now! :) i love this! ~Alyss |
CitrusObsessed chapter 1 . 6/28/2011 Hey there! I reviewed ;) Okay, I am LOVING the overall idea for this story, and I'm also glad you got right down to establishing facts in the first chapter. Like, you don't take your time on the pointless things, and I like that :) Seriously want you to update this, and if you could, make the chapters longer, because it would just be awesome to have more to read of this. Update soon, hun! -CitrusObsessed xx |
lady vonne chapter 1 . 6/27/2011 Very interesting concept. ;) And besides, I love Draco and Hermione together. Their pairing is such a mysterious one, isn't it? Granted, the snippy dialogue between the two in the beginning is always a good sign. One thing to remember, though, is that when you're ending a quoted sentence (in other words, one that is dialogue) you're going to need some sort of punctuation mark. It's not only grammatically correct, but it makes it easier to read, as well. Geddit? ;) Anyways, if you have time, I'd love for you to check out some of the one-shots I've written on my profile. I've got only a handful so far, but I'm working on more at the moment, as well. I'd love to hear your opinion! Thanks so much and, really, great job! -Vonne |