That was very funny, keep it up! XD

Bowser needs to learn what's good for his children...

HI-LA-RI-OUS!

Interesting concept. It's funny to see bowser flirting with peach, although you could add how or why she came to TV night. Story makes it look like he just wanted too, which is doubtful. Other then that, entertaining!

-Padfoot Moony and Prongs

Nice work- they're all pretty well in-character and the concept itself is hilarious- and you've written it very nicely. )

There are a lot of good bits to this story, some of which made me laugh out loud (and that's not easy for me). My favorites were Bowser complaining because everyone else was, Jr. hiding in his shell, and Morton butt-dialing. There were a few places where the wording was awkward, like "be exposed to such natures on television," but it wasn't so distracting. I love reading fiction about the koopalings and the way their different personalities play off each other. Great job on making them all unique in such a short space.

Hahahaha, "We don't go looking for honkers". Certainly not! This was very cute. It must be hard to get the Koopalings to do anything as a family.

idk who uses twerp anymore but this on was funny :)