Reviews for One Word
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
Oh so sweet thanks for the very good read
LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
Sweet and very nicely described. What a difference one word makes. Thank you.
rcfan77 chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
Sweet..and yeah it could have happened that way..exept for the ending...i don't think those three are that much intrusive! :)
bananas r gd chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
until he said "she WAS" i thought he was talkin bout lisbon!

this is fantastic!
Juliette101 chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
hahahaha that was great! Wldwmn told me to read this, and she was right :)
AnInnocentBystander chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
I was totally thinking he was talking about Lisbon during the video, loved this especially when Lisbon says they need to go on a date first!
Arianna Elizabeth Jackson chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
oh for the magic of fanficton :) what would we do without it :) espicaly well written ones like yours.
Somewhat Sporadic chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
*raises hand in the air* i thought that he was talking about her in the show! (mind you, my love for Jisbon and all that jazz probably fuzzed up my brain to make me think that something VERY unlikely was happening. Although, you have no idea how much i was physically praying silently to myself that he would say 'she is'. The look on Lisbon's face in that scene said it all. It was a look of love and sadness for Jane. End of.) It's amazing how one word can change the whole context and meaning of a sentence. Or in this case, a whole damn video clip!

PLEEEEEEAAAAAAASE! BRUNO! LET THEM GET TOGETHER AT SOME POINT! ...

Oh yeah, sorry. This was amazing. Thank you for posting this. I really wish that this was the way the actual episode turned out! I have to just say as well, when that woman in this ep started to come on to Jane and when she was saying stuff like 'Oh, we're made for each other', blah blah blah...i was like, BACK OFF! D: There's a reason why someone came up with the word Jisbon, peeps!

bleurgh...anyways, sorry, CrazilyRandom. I pologise you've had to listen to me ranting on. Loved the story! Much obliged! :D
NorticLatot chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I was so annoyed when he was talking about Lisbon, even my dad (yes, my dad) thought that he was talking about Lisbon. Did you see her expression when he said '...was." Awww. Well, thank GOD for fanfiction, right?
TheWritingDampire chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
To tell you the truth, I was actually snooping around youtube when i saw this clip (I live in rural western Australia so we never get episodes on time) and I was grinning like an idiot because it thought that there was finally some jisbon going on. Lets just say that my heart broke.. Did he seriously have to say "she was"?

Really good story by the wayy. Exactly how I imagined it if he had said "she is"

P.S sorry about the rambling :D
xfmoon chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I so thought he was taking about Lisbon on the show, until the 'she was'. I loved your tag, it was short and sweet! And the ending was great
TeresaAmaliaJane chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
This is ironic, because when Jane was describing Angela in that last scene, I was psyching myself up for when he said 'she is'. And my heart literally broke when he didn't. So I'm so glad you wrote this! It was wonderful. God, I wish it would happen though.

TAJ :)
LAurore chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I did, until the "she was"...

Nice OS ! ;)
Amri91 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
This is great! And the fact that it is a tag to a particularly fantastic episode just adds to the intensity.

I just wish he had said "She is"*sighs* Hopefully Season 4 brings Jisbon closer, as wonderfully as you did in your fic.

Thanks a lot for sharing!
Consulting Mentalist chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Hey! Awesome story, thanks so much for writing that! It was really cute, I liked the part when Lisbon said "This isn't right" and Jane got all freaked out, and the ending. Just one correction though - in the sentence "...she decided that he had been totally honest with her..." - the word with is spelt wrong. Great job!
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