cute arthur and ariadne fluff. i love it. keep it up. and post more soon.

please please please update soon!

Nicely done, it's really lovely. I hope you write more, and soon!

Haha, I love how her friends are. Great chapter. Hope you update soon.

Hey!

I really like this chapter! Molly and Courtney were fnny when the whol Arthur thing popped up. At the end, you were right. Arthur wouldn't be Arthur if he wasn't charming. :D

~SoulLove

Hey!

This was an awesome chapter and I absolutely can't wait for the next one! Everyone is perfectly in character and this is very well-written! I LOVE IT! :D

~SoulLove

Ooooh, I love I love. Great chapter. Hope you update soon.

Kay so I'm REALLY liking this. 3 That scene was one of my favorites - "It didn't work." "Yeah, it was worth a shot."

This might be a totally weird idea, but the first title that popped into my head was 'Explaining the Paradox'. xD I figure that kiss was a bit of a paradox in itself. -shrug- Just an idea.

It's lovely to read, for serious! You keep everyone in character even in the not-part-of-the-movie parts and it seems to flow really well.

Oh that point man...gotta love Arthur. XD

Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Waggy

Awww, lovely chapter. Hope you update soon.

I love this movie. And this followed what was in the movie to a tee. So good job!

A suggestion for the title: What Wasn't Shown

Maybe? I'll try and think of more, but that's all I can think of off the top of my head right now. Good luck with this!

Awww, I loved this little added details. Great start. Hope you update soon.

In need of a name, are you? A suggestion perhaps:

"Before The Storm" - a personal favorite saying of mine. It's all the things that build up. Or, in other words, "the calm always comes before the storm". Ironically enough, there is also a legitimate storm during that scene in the movie.

I'm afraid I can't be much help, title wise, besides that.

However, being an English Major, I feel obligated to tell you that you might want to use spellcheck a bit. "Professor" instead of "Proffesor". That sort of thing.

Also, I know you're just getting started, but perhaps try more missing moments type scenes. Things that didnt happen. Of course, I realize that you just used that to set the tone for Ariadne towards Arthur. It was well written, aside from the aforementioned spellings. I think it will go over quite well.

I am very interested to see where this goes because it was totally hinted that something more happened to lead up to the kiss but we were never shown. Darn Chris Nolan he got us exactly where we wanted planting ideas in our head lol. Cant wait for your next update

YES! Arthur ariadne are the best couple lol and I love how your like making it her thoughts during the inception job and not changing the script cause some stories do that and its like ohhh but this is awesome! Keep goin! :)