damit. the story is great. i hoped to read more chapter.

Ch 7 .

That would be intresting .

That is closer to my feeling .

Maelstrom ,whirlpool Of violent constantly shifting corrupted water with dark matter .

And my use of that negative energy understanding but hard to describe. Assume would be really powerful summoning attacks with that and shifting it to do in in the desired way .

But it is really corrupting and could make the user temporarily darker .

Please continue this I love this

This is great, your great, keep being great.

sakura gaining an innocence? man, I was hoping I was wrong about that. namely because it was too easy to predict. still, it'll be interesting to see which innocence she gets. a new one maybe? or possibly an old favorite? I look forward to the choice.

its been so long since I read this that I had honestly forgotten about all the gender bending. I had also forgotten about the harem mechanic you were using. the musk idea is actually I decent one, and definitely among the more original ideas ive read. most harem fics ive read are usually pretty lax on the whole explaining why the multiple partners thing works. typically they use the fandom CRA idea and leave it at that. while that does explain why they are legally ALLOWED multiple partners, it doesn't explain how they attracted said partners and keep them from killing the others.

some versions have used illusions, others use a hypnotic ability of some kind. but the musk idea, that actually has some basis in fact. I mean come on we learn about this in high school Biology classes. so I will admit that I actually like the idea.

since I cant remember if I reviewed the last time I read this, many of my subsequent reviews will likely read in a similar manner.

like it

Wow, Poor Naruto. Stuck between Kyuubi and Sasune.

Overall, interesting chapter. Not bad. Keep it up!

i still wish naruto got the clown crown claw/outfit/sword innocence or the vampire innocence... sasune uchiha noah! hurrah! an innocence for sakura...the dark boots or perhaps the hammer. you and i both know that she is amy rose in human form so the hammer would fit as well XD

yeah, i lost all interest when you expect me to believe that Kurama (or whatever your gnna name Kyuubi) would share her mate (if she ever had one), it just wouldn't happen

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon...

Cool

YAY! HAKU-CHAN! woo! X3 can't wait for more my friend this may be the best D gray naruto story yet. i look forward to a continuation or something of this beautiful story.

Sasune a Noah. Not surprised. The FF one winged angel thing surprised me the most. Taking a big guess that all/most of the girls in the harem would either inherit innocence or dark matter.

this is awesome i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!