Poor Clive. Poor everyone. ;.;
This was sad, but very well-written and believable.

Behold, the alternate ((or bad ending in AA speak XD)) and sad but very well written ending of Professor Layton and the Unwound Future.
Bye bye.
-A.

Aww! Poor Clive!

This made me cry heaps

I hope you continue it

I feel sorry for Clive just a kid caught up in his own madnes really good author

Sincerely, Redsparrow3

Poor Clive...:(

Gosh...so..very..sad...T.T. Beautifuly written I love the interaction between clarie and clive. Thankyou for writting!

~ Middy

Gosh...so..very..sad...T.T. Beautifuly written I love the interaction between clarie and clive. Thankyou for writting!

~ Middy

oh my gosh this made me cry. This is so well written. I never thought of what would happen of Clive had actually gotten to destroy london. Good job!

~Lizz

This was really good! It's a great prediction of what might have happened if Layton had failed to stop Clive. Very dramatic and descriptive!

This story is very good ! You've perfectly described Clive's thoughts, I had the feeling to be next to him, in the giant machine ! It's really well written. And sad, too... I particularly liked the comparison between Clive's machine and the London's organization machine. (The show must go on, as one said !) It's really well done.

So, congrats ! And sorry for my bad English, I'm French-speaking... I hope you've understood everything I said