| Reviews for The Love 'She' Had |
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Shadowstar King chapter 2 . 7/20/2015 I need...MORE! |
pooguy chapter 1 . 8/1/2013 Oddly enough, I am fairly sure that Simplicity is Complexity is the same place i first stumbled across naruto x Fem. kyuubi stories. |
Ashono444 chapter 2 . 1/15/2013 add hinata more more |
Rikudou-75 chapter 2 . 8/14/2012 She isn't really going to eat him is she. PLEASE tell me that comment was meant in a sexual orientation! |
Roanes Steel chapter 2 . 12/5/2011 Dude you are great and beyond! All the stories I've read rock you Sir have Talent plus same age group. If you ever want a game designer please pm me i always wanted to be one. Sorry I ramble. |
MunchkinRangler chapter 2 . 12/3/2011 HOLY SHIT! This has to be one of the best naruto stories that I have ever read and I would love so much for you to make it into a longer story. I can't wait to read more of this story. |
Hex4Life chapter 2 . 8/3/2011 Me like cant wait to read more |
Phanthomas chapter 2 . 8/3/2011 Nice. Keep it going, and tickle attack on Kyuubi was FUNNY! Update soon Bro/Sis. (Don't know gender) |
Silentdeath09 chapter 2 . 7/30/2011 Hmm, it's quite the story. I like it. Please continue it, at the end of chapter 2 it just stops. One thing most readers dislike is a cliffhanger and I am one of them. I quite enjoyed this story, and am in the progress of writing 2 of my own. This story and others like it help me write mine better. |
Shinryu chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 that was your first lemon? that was pretty good for a first timer. you should write more. i like this story a lot and i hope you continue to work with it. i already know i will be coming back for more. so please keep working on this story. it shows a lot of promise. if you get stuck read other people's fanfiction on this pairing for ideas to implement in your own way. another thing your grammar at least to my eyes is perfect i dont see that often, usually i see a few spelling error. sometimes i think they are typos but when i look at keyboard to see how close the letters the typos are i can see that they spelled it incorrectly. if only fanfiction paid money you could make a job out of this because you show so much promise in my eyes. so i wish you good luck on every single story you write. :) |
Veloran-Darkfyre chapter 2 . 7/22/2011 ! This is unbelievably funny! Props to the Author! |
tstoldt chapter 2 . 7/11/2011 please continue this fic i love it its so freaking sweet |
perch22 chapter 2 . 7/8/2011 I must say that you don't see good NaruKyuu pairings these days and that this story has potential to be a really good read. I'm looking forward to your future updates and to see how their relationship progresses. keep up the good work :) |
Deu2Ex chapter 2 . 7/8/2011 Great chapter and story so far, i really like the way you put the characters here and i just love the pairing, so keep it up and hope you update soon. |
Zeoth chapter 2 . 7/8/2011 Ai wants new chaptar NAw! |