This story is great, why don't you go on with it? Please continue!

Yay Sirius. That must be pretty boring, counting bricks. This one, suprisingly, is not as sad. yes it is sad, but not nearly as bad as some of the others.

i am simply loving these sad little flashbacks, they fit so well with the story. I have read your other work and i just want to say that you are an amazing writer and that you should seriously consider becoming a writer someday. or maybe you already are...i certainly hope.

Very original, you really bring out Sirius' angst and make you pity his life, i'm looking forward to more of this

this is an interesting take on Sirius' life. i'm eagar to see more, so keep writing!

Absolutly wonderful! I dunno what it is about this story! I love it! It's very well written, realistic too. I can't wait for more!

This is good, though not at all what I imagined his life to be. Please write more!

Wow. That was...deep. Your story is a completely different way of looking at Sirius that I never even thought of before. Very good work. I'll be adding this to my favourites, so please update soon.

Cheers!

~Aaren~

Okay this was the first of yours I read and now I've read another 9, all which are thoughly depressing and I cried in And then there was none. I really love all your stories and talk about angst. If you want to get bold and itallics in your stories them save it as a web page/explorer because that's what I find works for me.

Interesting turn...never heard /this/ one before/

This sounds good! Continue please!