| Reviews for Sacrifice Fly |
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TC chapter 1 . 3/15/2019 Great story i really liked the way you changed it around i dont usually read yaoi but i read some of your other stories and decided Id just read this one anyway |
iloveyaoi505 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 awesome! i absolutely loved it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2013 i really liked itachi in this. |
MysteriouslyMysterious chapter 1 . 8/8/2012 AWESOMENESS! I LOVED IT! |
Ookami-Ryuu chapter 1 . 5/28/2012 I don't know anything at all about baseball but yeah, still enjoyed the story from other aspects *chuckle* (and was also a bit grateful that you didn't go even deeper into the baseball talk, no offence but I would have gotten really confused *laugh* now it was still at a level that I could follow all right) I liked Itachi in this story, especially when he stood up against Fugaku of course. I also liked the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. /Dragonwolf |
violetkisses chapter 1 . 4/10/2012 Awwww, it was awesome! So cute and funny. Fuck Fugaku! hahaha. He is evil. |
iamnotaloneanymore chapter 1 . 2/14/2012 WOOOOOO two of my most favoriteist things ever combined into one: baseball and sasunaru! *swoons* seriously, I think this is the only fanfiction story I have ever read where when I see Lee I think Cliff. (Or really, I know it is) roflololol /dies very cute story and i loved all the details of the baseball game! i can totally see sasuke as a badass pitcher striking batters out left and right, gotta love that. and i'm glad he regained a little of his love for the sport; it would suck if he continued playing and hating the game.. especially since its such a great game! also the sasunaru loving was very cute (when is it not)? haha :) |
XXShiro-KunXX chapter 1 . 1/12/2012 I'm smiling like an idiot, the ending was great! |
operagirl76 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011 So glad that Itachi stood up for Sasuke and Naruto, and that Naruto's parents were supportive of them, too. |
kirstielynn chapter 1 . 8/24/2011 aww i hope thers a second part 2 this. anyway it was reaaaly awsome :) |
Albino.Narutard chapter 1 . 8/24/2011 This is a great story. Half the time I didn't really understand the baseball terms, but I love it none the less. Thanks for reviewing my story btw! |
Au Contraire chapter 1 . 8/10/2011 Ok, I have soo much to say, and I may go over the character limit, so please bear with me. Firstly, I'd like to congratulate you on a job-well-done on this story. To me, this was one of those lengthy, interesting ones that I add to my favorites and eventually re-read. You've truly done an excellent job with this story. Truly. Secondly, I'd like to thank you for knowing what you were talking about while describing baseball. Whether it is because you play the sport, or because you cared enough about the story to research it properly, I do not know. I do know, however, that I can appreciate the immense detail. You almost got too into it, but you didn't. It was just right :) Thirdly, I'd like to congratulate you on your grammar and punctuation. Not many know this, because I am kind enough to hold back, but I'm very picky-and perhaps a bit overcritical, heh heh- when it comes to grammar, and such. So I'd like to thank you for not having noticeable errors riddled throughout the story. Please know that I appreciate that as well. So basically, I just want to say that you're amazing, and I will not only be adding this story to my favorites, but I will also be checking out your other works. :) P.S. The ending wasn't so great, but it WAS kinda cute and could've been way worse. I wouldn't worry about it too much. :) Well, I'm off to bed. What better to end the night- well, early morning, actually- than with a mug of ice cream(vanilla bean, naturally) and a good story? Happy Writing |
derethefairy chapter 1 . 7/17/2011 YAHHHHHH, I LOVED IT. let me just make this clear: i don't like SasuNaru. however, this story is BRILLIANT and you should applaud yourself because you have made a non-yaoi fan like this story. good job. haha i liked the part where naruto "blushed like a virgin". (i did that at some points too. just...don't ask). ANYWAY, great story! that was awesome-ness :) |
XxCharlottexX1 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011 I would have totally used the "Konoha Fire Shadows"(Translated from Hokage) and it would have been damn awesome. I really like this story; neither character being very OOC, and I loved the baseball part. I love baseball in general; and my two favorite virtual hotties playing in it only helps, ne? Well, this is worty if the fave's list, my friend. :) Very, very good story. I LOVE the flashback with Itachi and Deidara; their one of my favorite pairings. |
SLYSWN chapter 1 . 7/11/2011 I don't care how long it was I totally and completely fell in love with this. The side stories, especially Itachi and Deidara, swoons...I never ever get enough of SasuNaru but it seems that only a select few authors like yourself can capture them in the way that I like these days. |