Excellent

loved it

What a story. What a story. Thank you so much! I enjoyed it immensely. I particularly liked that aside about the Kobayashi Maru. It made the world bigger than just Peter and the main cast of the Enterprise.

Wow. What a good speech! And what a good conclusion. Our articulate boy.

I have long wondered what happened to Peter Kirk after his parents died. I'm very willing to accept this interpretation. :) Thank you!

A stammering Vulcan? Impossible. He must be very moved.

*wraps up love nicely in Saran wrap* Here you are, dear.

I really like Peter and Soral's relationship. And I appreciate Peter's attitude. And it is a good thing that they ended up on a Vulcan ship; there's nothing like immersion.

Good old Sarek. Having a high-ranking diplomat for a very important ally in your corner is the best. :)

I know this was nine years ago, but-hope you're well!

What a cliffie. Fie. XD. Onward! I can't hang about with such a tempting lure under my nose.

Oof. That's rough. I'd have hoped that Federation folk would be more open-minded, but I guess people are people wherever you go.

Aww. Peter screwed up, but he tried to make amends. I wonder if Soral will get it.

I love all the character interactions in this story, btw. If you ever want a proofreader, just PM me.

Thanks for posting!

What an amazing ending, I loved the speech part and everyone's reactions to his going on board an all Vulcan vessel it was wild.

Ohhh a break through! That's exciting and I love the way this looks at how we would have friends with Vulcans super cool

"This is your baby too!" Oh my god that cracks me up. I know is you probably don't use this email anymore but if you do, I've discovered this story and I'm gonna either read the whole thing or just part but I'm excited for it.

This was an excellent story. I honestly do not mind the OC of Saren, or whatever his name was, as he wasn't some shallow character out there because the author felt like it, and he really added something to the story.
I think a oneshot followup of this would be excellent - or a full length story if you felt like it.

I really enjoyed this! Soral and his relationship with Peter Kirk was... Fascinating. Am I to understand from some of the reviews there's a sequel? I hope so and am going to check it out right now! Thank you for this story!