"I can't seem to think of anything to write after awhile. I have a clue as to where I'm going I just don't know how to get there."

sad to say i'm in the same boat / i have tons of ideas of where i want to be in a story but i can't eber seem to get myself to that point

really, I thought most had the grey blue?

Out of the 15 other brunetts I know none of us have brown eyes.

Nice, interesting plot.
And ooh yeah, I like angst. And for some reason I like it when one of them luffly boys are broken. To be patched up and 'healed' by the other, naturally. I hope you're going to update this one soon, I mean, I saw that it was put on hold, but I'm still hoping. :]

Aww writer's block SUCKS. I don't think I have any ideas aside from the completely obvious and non helpful ones, but this is still an awesome story so far! You mentioned that you had seena picture that inspired you...Do you remember where you found it? I'd like to see it, if you feel like putting the url or whatever up in the next chapter, or something. Whatever you have time for, if at all. Thanks, and great story! _

You need insperation, eh? Well... I'll need to find some. .;; Sorry, don't got any that I know of! Hmm... I dunno what you want n this story, so I'll try to come up with some stuff... My e-mail sucks when I'm not replying someone's e-mail, so I'll have to make a long review.

You could:

Squall act all cold like for a while, then have Seifer break the ice and warm him up.

2. Have Squall somehow get stolen from Seify, and then he has to look for him for a long time, until he finally is found with his old master who wasn't quiet as finished with him as he thought, then have Seifer whoop his butt, and save Squall and then Squall will eternally be in debt to him, and share himself with him.

can ask your mailbox for guidence.

everyone be eaten by rampaging Moombas.

...I like number 2...you decide!

~Lee~

...I dunno if my computer sucks, or if I'm missing some of your story on my screen...I'll find out next chapter..(It stops where Seifer asks Squall his name)

~Lee~

Woow! (woo, with a "w" sound at the end) Cool, I hate it when you're pale and sleep on a black sheet, It makes it easier for you to stand out, I wear black all the time, and I'm very pale, so I stand out a bit...It sucks, I like my privacy...Great fic though! I can't think of much to sugest, but I think Squall should act like Squall, and not be too open with the dude. He should not talk to him, then as time passes, he'll open up without warning and go berserk with emotion and crap... That's what I think anyway...Keep it up!

~Lee~

A picture? ...What kind? (I'm curious) I like the fic so far, I'd say to continue it, but you already have! Well, thanks for continuing anyway!

~Lee~

WRITE MORE! make Jake come back, do something! pwease? I'll give u a...chocolate covered strawberry! that's right- CHO-CO-LATE! ooooo...

I like this story. I think you should update more and you should probably go into why Seifer was looking to purcahse a boy in the first place. That might give you a direction to go in.

Hope that helps.

I actually read this on Voltress first. I didn't review cause there cause I was being a lazy ass. I know a story that seems simalar to this one. It's called Bloody Tyre. Type it into the search box thingie. You may get some inspiration from it. I wouldn't advise copying anything, though. _~

~*~VOM~*~

OMG! I demand to know why this ficcy hasn't been updated! It's an AmaZinG start! I HAVE to know what's going to happen next! I just love your descriptions... *makes a cstrangled noise* SO LOVELY! And the emotion... *gushes* You HAVE to write a new chapter before I kill myself waiting for it! This is soooo good! *continues rambling on unintelligly*

~Yaoi Dreamer~

This story is great! Please write more! _

Yea! Love it! Please finish? If I have any ideas, I'll send them your way...even if you probably won't use them._~ I'm not really as poetic as you...ugh. The fics I tried to be poetic on kinda...er...never mind! My Squall muse will help me think of ideas by influencing my dreams...*grins foolishly*..._~ Keep writing!

More? ::blinks innocently:: I want slash! Sorry- 's natural, I'm a slash monkey and a Seifer slut, or so LWG would put it ; Pretty story so far, I'm working on one sorta like this using Ann Rice characters!