Awwwww

Lovely story! Thank you for sharing!

I love this one!

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I loved it! This was adorable, sweet, and very slightly sad. XD

Amazing story! :) Gives happy feelings and a great read.

oh its adorable! i absolutely love it!

awwww...thread...fate...awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

I can imagine that clearly. The red string of fate

Ren-chan must have been blind cause he insisted that Sho and Kyoko-chan are tied together in that same red string. -giggle-

I've read this a few times now and thought I should let you know how lovely I think it is!

I love 6 yr old, adorable Kyouko and Sho in all his earnest desire to help his friend. So sweet. Kuon is amazing, but honestly, the fairy book stole the show for me! Is that bad? If it is, it's your fault! You described their little outfits and even their swords and armor :D It's in the details. I could picture each page. It made me want to squeal and wish I could go out and buy that book.

And finally, the fate fairy... I LOVED the red string! Perfect ending. Anyway, I'm gushing, partly because I'm tired from staying up too late working on Nanowrimo, and mostly because this is just too cute! Thanks!

Sorry for gushing...

the red thread

that's just so cute :D

awww...

that was such a cute touch at the end :)

Aww! That's such a great story! It made me cry how great it actually was!

For a few moments, Hizuri Kuon stands and contemplates the precious young child who has charmed her way into his life. Fleetingly, the young boy wonders if it might not be better to be her real prince instead of an imaginary fairy one. In that moment, an invisible spirit hovers near Kuon's hand. Deftly, the unseen creature ties an equally invisible red thread onto the pinky-finger of the blond American. With one more glance at the handsome youth, the true spirit streaks into the woods. The resilient thread that he carries may be long and tangled, but the fate fairy is sure that one day the two children will happily follow the thread back to each other once more.

XD XD I LOVE THAT PARAGRAPH!

~Harmony

I always thought that was a cute picture ever since I first saw it. It was adorable having Sho trying to find a way to make Kyoko feel better. People tend to forget that he was a sweet kid. I like how Kyoko thinks english is fairy language. It really makes sense that a child would think that way. It was cute that even at the age of six Kyoko's bright eyes could still sway Kuon to do whatever it took to make her happy. The girl has more power than she knows. I thought it was funny that as a child she still had the monsterous tummy rumble. Even though their string does seem to be very tangled I do think they belong together and this story did a great job of showing that.

What a lovely and sweet fairy tale! Your stories are always so enjoyable.