THE FLIRTING!

You should write a fanfic with River and Jack just TALKING! That would be flirting galore.

Thanks for this story! I really enjoyed viewing the Doctor and River's relationship through Amy and Rory's point of view. Very cute, and your banter is on-point; the dialogue could be from the show. Great job!

OH MY GOSH! This oneshot was priceless! Good job!
~RIVER 11 SHIPPER
aka
T. .G

very enjoyable! lol

Haha, Love it

Bow ties are cool

I made some embarrassing snorting noises while reading this. I was laughed at. But you know, it was worth it. That was hilarious. Your character voices were spot on, and the dialogue was just... XD

Ohhhh, thank you for that. I'm going to go to bed now.

So funny!

Awesome story! I loved seeing the Doctor and River's realtionship through Amy and Rory's eyes.

Love it, very nice and IC :P a great story

Smiling like an idiot and getting werid looks xD 33333

Poor, poor Amy and Rory! And that's their daughter! rofl

Lol this is hilarious! Please write more like it! You cheered up my day and I nearly choked on my apple juice from laughing so much!

You've got the doctor and rivers banter perfectly, completely in character.

"Well if you stop jerking it like that—"

"Oh, shut up. You like when I jerk it."

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I nearly fell out of bed, I was laughing so hard. XD

This was just completely hilarious and so in character that I couldn't help but laugh when I read it last night. There are too many things that were just so funny to actually list them all. You wrote this so well. It's definitely going on my favorites!