| Reviews for An entertaining evening |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2019 This was great. |
oma13 chapter 1 . 2/1/2018 That was cute. I really liked it. I loved Merlin in this. At least someone noticed Merlin's shenanigans! |
Honestly don't you two read chapter 1 . 7/21/2016 Hehe, that's a fun idea :-) Merlin/Sherlock crossover, good idea. |
toraneko-chan chapter 1 . 5/17/2016 Hahahaha, this is GREAT! Thanks for sharing this! :D |
Grac3 chapter 1 . 2/23/2016 This was highly amusing. |
Sakihinata chapter 1 . 12/24/2015 Laughing silently is hard, but as it is three in the morning I cannot do anything else ;) |
detectivejigsaw chapter 1 . 6/13/2015 Ha ha ha ha! This was so very funny. I liked that it was from John's point of view, and thought it was very in character for all of them. Well done. |
guardianofdragonlore chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 *drags hand down over face* How and why does John put up with Sherlock? How and Why? |
cindy4651 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014 Very nice, thanks! |
GuyFromGa11ifrey chapter 1 . 5/12/2014 Just have to commit one John, no one will mind. |
Kalincka chapter 1 . 3/12/2014 Just wow xD I love this OS ! |
Ryuu842 chapter 1 . 3/2/2014 Cute! |
Kangarooney chapter 1 . 2/14/2014 Hmmm. Two errors I noticed. 1. You used "defiantley" where I think you meant to use "difinitely" since the former refers to an attitude and the latter is a synonym to, ah let's say, "". Anyway, I've seen it often enough to not be surprised, but you shoould probably change it since it tends to throw a reader a little off-kilter, ruins the flow so to speak. And 2. Third to last paragraph, last line, third to last word: "our". It's a change in Person; the entire story is in 3rd, yet that one little word throws it into 1st. I'd suggest changing it to "their". That's all. Good story, might be able to use a little fleshing, an explanation of sorts on why Arthur and Merlin were thrust into the middle of Holmes and Watson's apartment, perhaps had Merlin and Sherlock hitting it off famously and jabbering nonsense at each other while Arthur and John watched incomprehensively. Anywho, ta! -Kangarooney- |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2014 I got it! I squaled! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2013 You should do a sequel. |