Absolutely beautiful. I love the feeling of melancholy this gives off... Good luck to you on your future projects, sir.

Also; there's FINALLY a Sluggy Freelance section in the Comics category. No stories there just yet, but I thought you might want to know.

*sniff with tears pouring down my face* I had hard time reading this. I started crying when I started reading this.

You're reading the comic and Riff blows something up and Bun kicks Torg through the bathroom wall so Gwynn beats him with her scrubby and you think life is good, and then Fire and Rain got pulled out and then tears just started running. This story definitely brought it all back.

Wonderful. Thank you for writing this. I cried myself at this part in the comic. I really wanted to see a fan fic off of this, and you have done so masterfully. The tone is sad, yet sweet, with a little humor to show you this is still the Torg we all know from the comic. Thanks again, this made my day!

Nicely done my friend. "Nucking Futs" ROFLMAO! I'm surprised there aren't more Sluggy comics, given how Pete keeps teasing us with TorgxZoe. You should write more, you have the same kind of humor as Pete but also have a good understanding of true emotion. About my only complaint is one or two minor typos. Well done, and you rucking fock! ;P

Aw... This fic was really sweet. Poor Torg though... *huggles Torg plushie*

This is a nice piece. The way it's written actually makes the characters seem like real people. Sluggy is awesome, but there's something about putting it in writting, and well done writing, that fleshes it out a little more.

Kudos, sir. "Fire and Rain" was one of the most poignant pieces St. Abrams ever wrote. You did a very good job of keeping the tension and the flavor of Torg's dilemma.

Goddess, almost three years since "F&R" and it still gets me.

Again, I thoroughly enjoyed your work.

oh wowowowowow! i really love it! I've been hanging on Fire and Rain forever and this POV is really well... it sums things up nicely. Going to do anymore sluggy stuff? that'd be cool!

Excellent. I hope you write another one. Fire and Rain was amazing; your maintained that feeling and did Torg's feelings real justice. The short phone call at the beginning was great too.

Torg and Zoe forever; now if Oasis would just stay dead...or obsess on Bert instead. (mental picture) Ugh. Never mind.

Very well done! *worshipping the fanfic*

Tisn't McFrugals anymore... now its the ever annoying Big!Lots (someone explain that to me, please) Very nice sentiment with just enough Mush. I feel so bad for Torg. *sniffles* okay, must be going... back to writing all that evil darness I have... Tralala...

Awwww...thats so sad! Even though I don't know much about the strip, other than what you showed me, that was really well done, I really felt for the characters... *sniff* Great job, as usual _