i'm a bit sad that naruto didn't get a chance to be chunin early, but i really liked how you wrote the exam in kiri.
liked the other konoha team as well -only for them to die for what felt like two minutes. figures.
i had a special appreciation for tetsuo-sensei, but that's probably due to being reasonable and not liking danzo. ha!

You are so incredibly creative to come up with your own Naruto multi-verse. Amazing job!

I dont like the fact that naruto gets paited with those people again he should have gone with the others for the chunnin exam and passed

Good job

What absolute dog shit. I can't believe I waisted my fucking time reading this, thinking it was complete. I hope something truly awful happens to you.

Ah, and here it is. Naruto can't become a Chunin because you're a stupid fucking idiot that can't add drama without this type of bullshit. Go fuck yourself you absolute fucking reject.

Hopefully someone will hit you for pretending to be smart enough to actually write.

Garbo.

I really enjoyed this canon divergence! Thanks for giving in to your muse :)

Yeah. No one wants that.

Awww... Tetsuo's jealous~

Kakashi taking his student from him, lol.

Omg. Yass! Bitchy Sakura is annoying. I'm glad that Naruto stopped that though.

Yikes. They seriously think that his own father would take someone else's kid before his own into being the vessel for the Kyuubi?

Woah. Naruto can leave almost no tracks? That's pretty cool.

Yikes. Iwa genin sure are brutal to even consider killing instead of trapping.