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aruvnei chapter 8 . 12/31/2011 I really don't understand why people don't leave you reviews for this story! Sure, your writing style is unconventional, but again, I have NOT seen ANYONE write this dark about Sam's life. And with so much passion. |
aruvnei chapter 6 . 12/15/2011 Sorry for not looking up the new chapters right away when you posted. Well, I did look them up, I just didn't review. I don't understand how come you don't have more reviews. You write with so much passion and feeling. And of course it's all heartbreaking. I love how you portray Spencer here! |
aruvnei chapter 5 . 6/7/2011 Wow! Can't wait for the rest! |
aruvnei chapter 3 . 6/6/2011 I was planning to say I love the line: "The stars looked so beautiful and I wondered where they went when they left their position in the night time skies what adventures did they go on? What stories could they tell? They had to know more then what they show they look so innocent up there twinkling and shining. But was it just a mask they wore? We all have them right?" but... if you say "love" is overused, I'll say i really like it. It's very well written. Makes me want to go outside and look at the stars. And I do like the bit about "love" as having lost its meaning. I'm sorry for Sam thinking that Carly doesn't want her in her life anymore. I like your poem at the end. (ADD, eh? I completely agree with you. (you know what I mean)) Wow... I really like the way you write. It's different, very unconventional, but I find it captivating. I am wondering what kind of person you are, and what kind of stuff is going on in your head, and I want to read more, but I have a headache so I'll have to finish up tomorrow. |
aruvnei chapter 2 . 6/6/2011 K, I'm just gonna type what I'm thinking. Nice opening, and it's not clear who Freddie is thinking about, although that becomes clear in second paragraph. I really like the description of the kiss. I feel sorry for him reading the first list he did, but then went aaw, sweet reading the second list. (c'mon every girl would go aaaw at "i will treat her right and never lie to her". (oh, and I like the fact that you flushed left this time, it is easier to read) Is Gibby jealous? Interesting hint at physical attraction there. (she's 16? I thought you said it's three years after the taco truck thing? nevermind, just being picky) Bad, bad Freddie for not telling about Sam. |
Emeralddusk chapter 1 . 6/1/2011 Great story! I am adding you to my new community; iCarly Dreams... if you don't mind. |
aruvnei chapter 1 . 5/30/2011 Before I put it in the "iCarly angst and drama" community - is this a one shot? It sounds like it but then you're saying something about chapters so I don't know. Great insight into the feelings of... Sam? Freddie? Doesnt sound like Carly, but who knows... Will you tell us? |