This was beautiful. I like how you didn't detract from the focus on Seth to show us the ritual. The man's grief is heart-wrenching, and his eventual acceptance. I can't help but compare this with what Kaiba's reaction would be if this were Mokuba.

This is a great little moment. Really enjoyed reading this.

That was so sad.

I loved this story!

Set, Seto Kaiba, Atem, and Yami, are all my favorite characters! I love them all so much! Their all so hot and dreamy!

Oh wow. You didn't just kill some of the priets, you basically kille them all plus Mana. And wow. That was sad. Especially the ending.

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Poor Seth... He did try anything, but Atemu just wouldnt chance his mind.

The way you wrote this little scene, just before the battle... it warms my heart.

Excellent work! This is wonderfully written with such raw, honest emotion and fantastic imagery. You've have a definite way with words and tugging at the readers' heartstrings. Thank you for sharing this piece! :D

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Great fic! I felt like crying! Very moving and deep, keep up the awesome work! This should have way more reviews :/

Wow...I have no was very intense and touching.I wish I could convey my emotions while reading this,but I I will simply say "Great job!"Absolutely beautiful.

Thank you for the one-shot, this is very touching.

This is sad. I love how you did this.